Rainbow

Teddy.15

 

rain and sun entwined 

 

a smiley face upside down 

 

a joyful surprise.

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.

    • Teddy.15

      Hey my dear sorrenbarret have a wonderful time in Australia what an amazing place to be. ❤️

      • sorenbarrett

        Not Austrailia but Brazil it`s the southern hemisphere as well you know. Still down under if you look at it from a European perspective.

        • Teddy.15

          Oh I see I thought you may have been visiting Dave lol 🤣 happy Brazil 🌹

          • Doggerel Dave

            Phew - almost had the gun turrets and barbed wire up!😂🙃

            • Teddy.15

              Lmao 🌈

              • Doggerel Dave

                A laugh a day keeps the doctor away - expensive in your neck of the woods are they?🙃

                • Teddy.15

                  Not at all we have a national health service, lucky for us I guess. S S.N and it works very well every region has their own but here in Tuscany is one of the best. 🌹guns are illegal too 🤣 unless you are a hunter with a licence

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Worthwhile cultural/political information, Teddy - thanks.👍

                  • Cassie58

                    Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you so much dearest Cassie, always my pleasure to remind my dear poet friends to smile ❤️

                    • MendedFences27

                      A terrific haiku, "a smiley face upside down" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you so much dear Phil, we are actually having record wet weather here. 🌹

                        • MendedFences27

                          Maybe you'll get to see one.

                          • Teddy.15

                            The rainbows here are spectacular dear Phil. 🌹

                          • aDarkerMind

                            a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.

                            much needed
                            and very much enjoyed my friend.

                            • Teddy.15

                              My dear Melvin, we are having some very wet weather here too, very rare for September the temperature has dropped 15c from 40c so it's practically winter lol, always a pleasure to know you smile dearest of friends. 🌹 ❤️

                            • Cheeky Missy

                              Fascinating. My la!

                              • Teddy.15

                                Thank you... 🌹

                              • Goldfinch60

                                May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.

                                Andy

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Thank you dearest Andy 🌈🌹



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