rain and sun entwined
a smiley face upside down
a joyful surprise.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Happy Sunday 🌈
- Category: Nature
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Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under, how appropriate it be upside down. A great haiku my friend.
Hey my dear sorrenbarret have a wonderful time in Australia what an amazing place to be. ❤️
Not Austrailia but Brazil it`s the southern hemisphere as well you know. Still down under if you look at it from a European perspective.
Oh I see I thought you may have been visiting Dave lol 🤣 happy Brazil 🌹
Phew - almost had the gun turrets and barbed wire up!😂🙃
Lmao 🌈
A laugh a day keeps the doctor away - expensive in your neck of the woods are they?🙃
Not at all we have a national health service, lucky for us I guess. S S.N and it works very well every region has their own but here in Tuscany is one of the best. 🌹guns are illegal too 🤣 unless you are a hunter with a licence
Worthwhile cultural/political information, Teddy - thanks.👍
Wonderful brevity dear Teddy. Sun and rain combined gift us rainbows. What an uplifting sight they are with their arc of splendid colour. Yes, they can make an unhappy day smiley.🌹🙂
Thank you so much dearest Cassie, always my pleasure to remind my dear poet friends to smile ❤️
A terrific haiku, "a smiley face upside down" is brilliant. Loved this one. - Phil A.
Thank you so much dear Phil, we are actually having record wet weather here. 🌹
Maybe you'll get to see one.
The rainbows here are spectacular dear Phil. 🌹
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much needed
and very much enjoyed my friend.
My dear Melvin, we are having some very wet weather here too, very rare for September the temperature has dropped 15c from 40c so it's practically winter lol, always a pleasure to know you smile dearest of friends. 🌹 ❤️
Fascinating. My la!
Thank you... 🌹
May that smile always be with us Teddy, fine Haiku.
Andy
Thank you dearest Andy 🌈🌹
The two poems are such contrasts and are very well written. I hope you figure out a way out of the warehouse into something that you will enjoy doing. Keep writing.
Hello dear Peet, this is one poem it's called haiku it's 5/7/5 syllables and has to be a theme of imagery thank you so much, once I find my way out of this wearhouse I shall indeed come back. Thank you. 🌹
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