For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough

Neville

For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough

 

Sometimes,

when everything is perfectly aligned,

   the light displaced, can be blinding ..

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2024 14:05
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  • Tony36

    Great write

    • Neville



      How very kind, many thanks Tony36, such visits are always welcome and muchly appreciated .. Neville

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • Doggerel Dave

        Feels sometimes that it's Zen......Neville.... I'm feeling displaced and disoriented.....

        • Neville



          sometimes one just has to roll with it .. and after so long Bingo enlightenment .. I'm still waiting and my roll now resembles a stretched baguette .. Z

        • Goldfinch60

          So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.

          Andy

          • Neville



            unless one is on life support, I guess you are on course for a cocoa nut squire .. cheers

          • sorenbarrett

            Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn't quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings

            • Neville



              Thanks my friend .. I suspect it was my fault .. sorry .. Neville

            • Cheeky Missy

              Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.

              • Neville



                what a very kind thing to suggest .. many HUGE thank you's are on their way Missy .. Neville

              • Cassie58

                A very meaningful piece of brevity. It doesn’t happen often, but when it does, it makes up for the rest. Nice.

                • Neville


                  You can beat an egg if you are into that sort of thing, but you just can't beat a bit of meaningful brevity no matter how hard you try can ya .. Cheers Cassie, I owe you one ..

                  Neville



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