Crumbs 

Neville

Crumbs 

It was while I was
sitting alone
at a table for two
and staring
into the depths of
my second
double espresso ..
I tried to 
make some sense 
of all
the crumbs my 
breakfast 
croissant had left 
behind,
on the side plate ..
It was also 
the same moment
I thought,
if I was to try hard 
enough ..
I might just find a 
certain 
familiar face again .. 
But failed
just as miserably, 
as I had 
done yesterday ..
And the day 
before that even ..
In fact, all 
I could see through 
the tears 
and the steam was 
the back 
of your torn leather 
sandal strap
and frayed hems 
of blue jeans ..
Each caressing your 
Achilles 
and all that then 
remained of your 
exquisite vulnerability .. 

 

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  • Cheeky Missy

    Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.

    • Neville


      Thank you for checking in and taking a peek .. kind regards, Neville

    • Alan R

      What a beautiful expression here !

      • Neville



        Many thanks indeed .. Neville

      • Cassie58

        Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.

        • Neville



          Bless you Cassie & I do mean that .. Unfortunately got stranded in Zagreb for two days after BA cancelled my return flight without notice or explanation .. cost an absolute bomb for hotels and taxi and dog holiday fees and loads of other things .. but yes, I had a lovely time in Croatia once my business in Bulgaria was sorted .. Hope you have been keeping well .. AGT's Neville

          • Cassie58

            What an awful end to your holiday Neville but so pleased that your time in Bulgaria and Croatia was lovely. I am well, thank you for asking. Trust you are too. Welcome back.

          • Tony36

            Excellent

            • Neville


              Nice one ta T .. Neville

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • MendedFences27

                Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her "vulnerability." Even the "crumbs of " your "croissant" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.

                • Neville



                  Thanks a million Hawkeye .. so very much appreciated you might never know just how much .. Neville

                • Accidental Poet

                  That you would speak of such things shows that for at least for a moment all was right. 🌹

                  • Neville

                    You got me completely AP cheers my friend and truly.. Neville

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Just calling it like I see it N. 😉

                    • orchidee

                      Good write N.

                      • Neville

                        Thank you O .. N

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Emotive words Neville, it reminded me of the times after my wife died when I was sitting at the dining table eating alone.

                        Andy

                        • Neville

                          Thank you kindly my friend .. Neville

                        • sorenbarrett

                          A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not just sexual but to the mind pulling it in closer and arrousing interest and a desire for closure. Lovely Neville

                          • Neville


                            so very many special thanks my friend .. Neville

                          • Tom Dylan

                            A fine write, Neville. Emotion, sentiment, all just perfectly captured. Cheers, Tom

                            • Neville


                              Thanks Tom & please excuse my late response, I have been somewhat tied up and elsewise preoccupied .. Neville



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