There is a place that I know
Where there’s generosity,
Somewhere that I want to go
Where there’s no ferocity.
This place is so full of peace
And no one argues at all
As those differences will cease
When just love is at our call.
Everyone’s there for each other
None suffer being alone,
We’re like sister and brother
Where just love and peace are known.
Come all of you and join me,
Come to my Island of Dreams.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yes, another sonnet, I just cannot seem to stop writing them
- Category: Reflection
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Good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
I like your island of dreams.
You are more than welcome to join me Saleh, thank you.
Andy
Wonderful dear Andy
Most kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
Another sonnet you are clearly at least twice as brave w me 😎👍
They seem to have hooked me Neville, no idea why.
Andy
A beautiful place indeed my friend and I believe it is found in one's own mind and heart.
Than you soren. Yes it is probably very true.
Andy
And you don't have to stop writing them. Your quill is at your command Andy. Excellent. 😁
Thank you AP, much appreciated.
Andy
Such wonderful sentiment here in your words Andy. Love your posted music too. Took me back in time. Lovely and upbeat. Have a great Thursday. Island of Dreams is the place to be.
Your words are very much appreciated Cassie, thank you so much.
Andy
A fantastic Sonnet!! 👏
Sounds like the
place id like to be!! 😃
Beautifully woven
penned so eloquently!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, you would be more than welcome to come to that Island.
Andy
Awesome write
Most kind Tony, thank you.
Andy
You're welcome Andy
Very lovely, my dear Sir, another charming three rhymed quatrains with a couplet to tidily close them, beautifully rendering a delicate reality you topped off excellently with the perfect accompaniment. Thank you for sharing.
So kind Missy and very much appreciated, thank you.
Andy
Nicely done! I think we all need a place like that. 🙂
We certainly do Tom, you are more than welcome to join me.
Andy
Dunno how I missed this little gem when I keep a close eye on what you are up to, Andy.
Nice work.
It happens sometimes Dave, this age thing misses things sometimes.
Thank you.
Andy
And the time zones. Keep up the good work, Andy.
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