Now we are three....

orchidee



No, not about an addition to the family...

We were four of us, here at home

Now we are three

Now you, Dad, have departed

 

You had visitors in hospital

Whether recognising them or not

And prayers said with you

And Bible verses read to you - the word of life

 

Rest in peace now - awake to eternity

If, we trust, you had at least

Some Christian belief

Sometimes it's 'Whose faith is known to God alone'

 

You said to me near the end 'I am thirsty'

So did Jesus near His end

I sort of sensed the end was near

When you looked poorly and alone

Moved to a separate hospital bed

 

We're numb - it's a bit unreal

Believing you're still in hospital ward

And yet you're not now.....

R.I.P.

 

In the hymn - 

Eventide comes, then the night

Then the morning of eternal life....

 

 

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2024 01:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just some thoughts really, and a comforting hymn.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 48
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Accidental Poet, LP2187
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  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful words Orchi, he will be at peace now and you will remember the best times forever.

    Andy

    • orchidee

      Thanks a lot Andy.

    • sorenbarrett

      My condolences Orchi but a tribute well written my friend.

      • orchidee

        Thanks SB.

      • Neville



        every word felt .. & truly believed to be from the heart .. my condolences to all ..

        • orchidee

          Thanks N.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Take care, Steven.

          • orchidee

            Thanks D.

          • Cassie58

            Such a sad time for you. Your thoughts here touching to read. Take good care of yourself while you grieve Orchi 🌹

            • orchidee

              Thanks Cassie.

            • Dan Williams

              Calls up my Brother and I sitting with my Dad as he slipped away, so much hurt.

              • orchidee

                Thanks Dan.

              • Tom Dylan

                So sorry for your loss. Thinking of you at this time.

                • orchidee

                  Thanks Tom.

                • Accidental Poet

                  Every father shall leave his children in peace and in calm wake behind him. My condolences to you and family.

                  • orchidee

                    Thanks AP.

                  • Thad Wilk

                    A beautiful poem
                    and heartfelt dedication..
                    😢 🙏
                    My condolences I send.
                    Thanks for sharing my friend!
                    Best regards ✌️ Thad

                    • orchidee

                      Thanks Thad.



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