Country walk

sorenbarrett

Tobacco green wave on hills
golden wash of sun flowing
from morning's fountain spills
over undulating seas growing

Helios inscribes his time consuming arc
cloud numbers move across sky's clock
painting hands, shadows long and dark
dirt road behind, now a wake on my walk

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  • orchidee

    Good write SB.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much Orchi it is appreciated

    • Doggerel Dave

      Word picture well painted, Soren.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Dave appreciate the read and kind words

      • Cassie58

        Your words have captured some fine imagery here Soren. In my mind’s eye I saw movement and colour, sunlight and shadow. Lovely.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much my friend I deeply appreciate your read and kind comments

        • Alan R

          Beautiful!

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Alan for the read and kind word it is deeply appreciated

          • aDarkerMind

            a very expressive write soren.

            picture perfect and most enjoyable.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much for the review and most generous comment it is most appreciated

            • Teddy.15

              Wow I feel like I was with you on the country walk, I was on my own today in the magnificent hills of Florence but yours capture the smell too. Stunning write my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you my friend your words are most appreciated. I love walks in nature and admire all her beauty that I miss in the city.

              • Dan Williams

                Spoken like a true country boy, at heart anyway. Nice.

                • sorenbarrett

                  I guess that is true. Thanks for the read and kind words Dan

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful words soren describing time in Nature's beautiful way.

                  Andy

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you Andy for your most kind words of support

                  • Tom Dylan

                    A fine write.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks Tom Appreciate it

                    • NafisaSB

                      lovely imagery - can actually visualize it..keep it up dear

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you for the read and encouragement it is most appreciated

                      • AuburnScribbler

                        Majestically penned here sorenbarrett!

                        I can imagine your inner monologue reading this, in a sage like tone, setting the scene of a stage play.

                        Well worth a favouriting, bravo, and I hope that all is well.

                        • sorenbarrett

                          A heartfelt thanks for your most encouraging words of support they are most welcome and cherished

                          • AuburnScribbler

                            You are most welcome!



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