What have we done to get into this life,
Our love so strong we do not understand,
In our time together there is no strife
Within that short moment that has now spanned.
We have come together as if one soul
Feeling so alone when not together
Walking through our life in a gentle stroll
In our superb world full of fair weather.
At our old age we just don’t understand,
Both in our seventies had a good life,
We had lost passed loves in time that had spanned,
Mary lost her husband, I lost my wife.
Now us two old codgers live life’s new dream
With feelings of love in our life’s bright gleam.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: We just do niot understand how strong our love is at our old age.
- Category: Love
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Comments8
A wonderful codgers tale, and true for you both! Is Mary millions of years old too?
Thank you Orchi. Yes Mary is a old as us.
Andy
Your destiny has been reached.
🌹🌹
It certainly has AP, thank you.
Andy
Two special old codgers in my opinion, did you fall in the greatest book of sonnets this week? Oh no you produced them 🤣 I'm not even a tiny bit envious ❤️ to you and dear Mary happy Saturday
Thank you for your very kind words Teddy, much appreciated.
Andy
You are a couple of very lucky people .. and I must say, long may it continue ..
We certainly are and we say that ourselves. Thank you Neville.
Andy
A touching and beautiful sentiment expressed in this poem of mature love. May it continue forever.
Thank you so much for your kind words soren.
Andy
Love it
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome Andy
Very, very sweet you liked to render your tribute to love in a sonnet, Sir. How very beautiful this indeed is, forsooth. Rendered to effect with delicate sensitivity and fragile poignancy reigning throughout, decked with choice details and an accompaniment which is as ever too perfect, thank you so much for sharing.
Thank you for your wonderfully kind words Missy, very much appreciated.
Andy
Bravo and congratulations, this is good for my soul. Thank you.
Most kind Dan, thank you.
Andy
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