Love must be the way we go in this world
Overcoming the troubles that we know
Verifying love like a flag unfurled
Enjoying each day through our sorrow flow
Making life on this world be full of peace
Understanding all that we know abound
Saving this earth and making love increase
To form that place where joy and peace come round
Everybody must work with each other
Victimising now a thing of the past
Everyone now like sister and brother
Roving this world knowing that hate passed
Bring love to this wonderful world of ours
Ever living in those universal stars
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 22nd, 2024 01:03
- Comment from author about the poem: Lets us all bring love to this world.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 29
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Cheeky Missy
Comments8
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
sounds and feels like a plan mate ..
I would like to think so Neville.
Andy
Give it a try, Andy.
I always will Dave, thank you.
Andy
Beautiful in form and sentiment Andy. Nicely done
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
A beautiful way to live life. πππΉ
How you none too subtly cull a smile frae me somber mien whenas I verily believed I mustn't be so happy nor contented with this deliciously rainy day. Me likes this take on the challenging form, acrostic proving itself able to perform the necessary acrobatics. Charming. Dredge up the era of my conception, will you? Lovely. The flower children may thank you, Sir. Winsomely rendered with a very subtle poignancy and minute details. Thank you for sharing your expertise, Sir.
So kind Missy, thank you for your fine words.
Andy
I sure hope your vision is better than mine. Nice work.
We can all but hope Dan. Thank you.
Andy
Awesome Acrostic Sonnet! π
Uplifting and exhilarating,
great presentation! π
Loved the song π΅πΆπΆ
made me wanna sing along! βΊοΈ
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Thank you Thad, much appreciated. The Moody Blues are tremendous.
Andy
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