Garden with no gardener

sorenbarrett

Waterfalls of painted caladiums, ferns, heliconia in streams forming pools
Alocasia umbrellas, under drops of yellow orchids, golden pearls, floral jewels
Palms dripping lichen rivulets, flowering flame bromeiliads, nature's wall hangings on trees
Kapoc's hairbrush of thorns, rain taffy pink blossoms a breaking wave's mist of petal seas

Guarded by feathered choirs of winged rainbow angels painted
echoing celestial music, harmony of nature untainted
 Finches green, red, yellow, turquoise, humming birds, gralha of sky blue
Under trunk pillars with gloss of moss, paradise's untended garden grew

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2024 03:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: gralha are sky blue birds about the size of large pigeons,
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 84
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, aDarkerMind, Cheeky Missy
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  • Teddy.15

    Isn't nature superb, I too have a yellow orchid and I too don't have a garden, yet I care for it the same. This is precious 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much Teddy walking the forested hills reminds me that nature is a far better gardener than I. Appreciate your comments they are always valued

    • aDarkerMind

      nature in all it's splendour Soren.

      picture perfect

      as is every line you have written.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are too kind my friend but nature is a far better gardener than I but then it has more experience. Appreciate your most kind words my friend

      • Neville


        I am a very keen horneythologist but never heard of a gralha .. I can just picture the multicoloured vista .. splendid .. Neville

        • sorenbarrett

          Didn't find the word in English so that is Portuguese at least Brazilain Portuguese. Thanks for the review Neville

        • orchidee

          That's a lot of flowers to have to be gardening!

          • sorenbarrett

            Yea but nature does all the work. Thanks Orchi for the read and comment

            • orchidee

              I don't know half the things in this poem!

            • Thad Wilk

              You have painted
              a most stunning scene 😍
              An outstanding
              poem, picturesque
              and serene! 🐦 🌈 🌺
              Thanks for sharing my friend! ☺️
              Best regards o Thad

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Thad for the read and most kind words they are surely valued

              • Dan Williams

                A veritable symphony of flora and fauna. Very nicely done.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks Dan for the review and comment it is always appreciated

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful colour filled words soren. Thank you for sharing them.

                  Andy

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks Gold for the read and as always kind words



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