it’s the light that lifts our mind set
when the heart is sunk at sea
when you sit there by the harbour
in your state of misery
when you dwell on all that’s heavy
when the future paint is grey
and the palette shows insipid
on the doldrums of the day
it’s the gleam upon the water
it’s the sparkle in an eye
it’s the flash of silver lining
that will raise those spirits high
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Cassie58 (
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A fine write C.
Thank you Orchi for stopping by and for your kind words.
Great poem
Thank you so much for reviewing Loving Light. I appreciate your kindness. Have a lovely day.
You too 🙂
Absolutely beautiful I make it my business to see a silver lining every day dearest Cassie, such a stunning write my silver lining today is this moment being here with you and cheeky missy ❤️
Thank you so much Teddy. What a lovely thing to say. Delighted to have a visit from both you and missy. When I wrote this poem some time ago, I remembered my Grandad Albert who introduced me to poetry , who always pointed out to me the silver lining on rain clouds when they appeared. So pleased you enjoyed the read. 🌹
A lovely message so well said. It is the little things that make a difference in mood, a smile, the twinkel of an eye, a cheerful voice make all the difference. Lovely
It is the little things that can make a difference. Thank you Soren for such an encouraging and supportive review. Much appreciated.
I can not seem to conjure your kind of optimism; happy that you can. Nice.
Little things can give me a lift. I always find sunlight on water particularly uplifting. If I am having a down day, just a little time spent where there’s a gleam of sunlight can lighten the mood. That’s not to say it!s going to last, but it can help. I do try to be optimistic. Pleased you enjoyed my poem. A big thank you Dan.
Thank you. I needed this. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heartening poignancy. Very, very lovely and solacing. Thank you so very much.
Missy, so pleased that you enjoyed my Loving Light. Nice you got something from it. A pleasure to have you visiting my page. A big thank you.
May your silver lining always be lined with a 🌹. Have a nice weekend Cassie.
Hello dear AP. You always leave me such lovely comments. I hope you have a lovely weekend too. Going on a holiday tomorrow for a week.
Oh, let me pack my bags. I'll only be a minute. 😁
Now this is what I'm talkin' about. Real Poetry. Well done. I love the cadence and the positivity
Thank you for your lovely comment. Sorry about the delay in responding David.
Those silver linings are always there for us Cassie.
Andy
Thank you Andy. Sorry about the delay in responding.
trips along beautifully!
Thank you FrasMac for stopping by. Sorry about the delay in responding.
Truly sad to see you going off on a break, your poetry is one of the reasons I pass by each day. I hope to see you back soon my dear English rose 🌹
Thank you dear Teddy. 🌹
I relly need to find this place. Your usual fine work.
Thank you Dan and sorry for the delay in responding.
Just beautiful.
Thank you Thomas and apologies for my delay in responding.
I JUST LOVE TO READ
YOUR POEM
Thank you poetaldo. Pleased you enjoyed my poem. Sorry for the delay in my response to you.
Thanks for that last encouraging line. Perfect as always! Lol
Thank you Natalie. Sorry for the delay in my response.
What a masterpiece! I can read and reread, then do it again
Thank you Aloo. Sorry for the delay in my response.
it is poetry's loss when poets like you take a long break inspite of it being a part of you
come back soon with some more beautiful verse / words
take care
Thank you for your kind words dear friend. Sorry for the delay in response.
stay strong, healthy and happy. have a great weekend
Inspirational .. 💜
Thank you my friend 💜
I like the use of colours in the writing .. nice words lighthearted in tone
Thank you so much for stopping by Caring dove with your kind thoughts. Have a great Tuesday.
That’s ok . And you ))
You caught my feelings in this moment…
Thank you so much for that comment. Really appreciate your visit here today. All good wishes.
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