Autumnal Tanka.

Goldfinch60



Red, yellow and gold,

Autumns colours fill my mind,

Glorious nature.

Frosts will soon carpet the ground,

And sparkle in the sunlight.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2024 01:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: Autumn is my favourite time of the year.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 86
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful dear Andy, you always remind me of home with your glorious imagery of autumn. 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      Much appreciated Teddy, thank you.

      Andy

    • Neville



      Autumn very nIcely tanked sir Finch ..

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Neville, thank you.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Abeautiful picture painted. Natuer in all her splendor is stunning. Very nicely written Gold

        • Goldfinch60

          It surely is beautiful soren, thank you.

          Andy

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good write, Andy. I love the Fall.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thanks Jerry, as do I.

            Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            I must away to the Blue Mountains (behind Sydney) again..... Got time - I'm still trying to deal with Spring...Thanks for the reminder though Andy - I'll make a note in next year's diary.

            • Goldfinch60

              Spring is fine as well Dave, I am sure that you will enjoy it.

              Andy

              • Doggerel Dave

                Suddenly become a weather oracle in your maturity, Andy? Last spring was terrible and this spring is lining up to be no better or worse....
                🌧️.☔🌧️☔🌧️.☔🌧️☔

              • Cheeky Missy

                My niche, as well as sonnets, is Autumn, October to boot as well. Rendered in tasteful brevity, how lovely this is with its wonted perfect accompaniment. Thank you very much for sharing!

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Missy, thank you.

                  Andy

                • David Wakeling

                  Gotta love Autumn. I believe people fall in love in Autumn not Spring. Anyway good poem

                  • Goldfinch60

                    I surely do love Autumn David, thank you.

                    Andy

                  • A.H. Browning

                    Very nice.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you AH.

                      Andy



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