Standing so close to the fire
A heart defends itself with ice
Gone now is the desire
To feel the kisses fire
The wall of love—crumbles thrice
Before the cannonballs of hate
The castle-keep becomes Ice
Hope of ceasefire may well be great
Goodbye may have to suffice
- Author: Jerry Reynolds ( Offline)
- Published: September 28th, 2024 09:12
- Category: Forgiveness
- Views: 71
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy, Qurrathul Ain
Comments8
Emotions are like that, sometimes hot sometimes cold. Protection from what is a percieved threat can flip the tables. A poem with a smoldering finish
Thanks, SB
Good write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchi.
Magnificent 🌹
Thanks, Teddy.
Lovely in brevity and excellently rendered with awesome imagery, and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks, CM. My pleasure.
Sweet, heartfelt. Sounds like true love. Nice work.
Thanks. Dan.
May that good bye become hello and love abounds Jerry.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
There is always a unity or tenuous link between opposites .. it just takes someone to point them out .. .. some times .. well pointed Jez .. N
Thanks, Neville. Tenuous link, frayed but hanging in.
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