I Look Up Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



I look up into the sky passed the clouds

Beyond the beauty of the bright blue sky

Into the Universe that the sky shrouds

Letting my questioning mind to it fly.

 

I look up into the sky passed the moon

To the wondrous darkness filled with bright stars

Into the Universe where I’ll be soon

Chasing the times of all my fine memoirs.

 

I look up passed the world that’s in my mind

Beyond reality into those times

Where my love for all has gone and enshrined

Where my love for all loudly strikes it chimes.

 

The Universe is there both day and night

To bring peace to us all with this I write.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 29th, 2024 01:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: May peace be with us in the Universe.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy
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Comments8

  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful... 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Teddy, most kind.

      Andy

    • Neville

      Tis indeed lovely Andy and many congratulations on achieving over one hundred thousand readings on your posts sir .. that's one helluva achievement .. Neville

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Neville on both counts, very much appreciated.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        A fine write Gold.

      • sorenbarrett

        Bless you Andy for these fine words. They did indeed bring a feeling of peace and calm. Thank you for sharing.

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind soren, thank you so much.

          Andy

        • Thad Wilk

          👍👍
          A terrific Sonnet
          and refreshing indeed!!
          Articulately penned ✍️
          a real treat to read!!
          Best regards ✌️ Thad

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you so much for your very kind words Thad.

            Andy

          • Cheeky Missy

            Oh! THIS piece!! You just had to go and choose this piece to accompany it: I nearly swoon! I LOVE this piece!!!!! A charming sonnet beautifully rendered with choice details and a haunting poignancy, paired with THIS piece--I can't but LOVE it! Thank you, Sir, so very much for sharing.

            • Goldfinch60

              So kind Missy and I am so glad that you enjoyed both the words and the music.

              Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              I certainly hope so Andy. 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                So do I AP.

                Andy

              • Tom Dylan

                A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

                • Goldfinch60

                  My pleasure Tom, thank you.

                  Andy



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