Notice of absence from Doggerel Dave
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. ๐
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. ๐
Autumn it Is Not.
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Antipodean
Weather wet windy woeful;
Spring sprung, little sun.
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Author:
Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Haiku โ my version.
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- Users favorite of this poem: ๐ฉMase๐ช, Cheeky Missy
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Is your Autum like our Spring in the UK - with one of us (or both) being 'upside down'?!
Sir Orchi NS says: Australia? That's just round the corner; 5 minutes on the No.7 bus from the UK. lol.
Sir Orchi NS is round the corner (bend?) alright.
However, I must reluctantly concede that you obviously gave my little piece at least some consideration.
Sir Orchi NS - I dunno who he is - some nutty chap! lol.
You are beyond belief... do I have to periodically remind you of the Non Sequitur element of your award?
this is not a classic, is it sir ..
I am increasingly of the mind there is summat in this global warming .. innit
's possible I 'spose....
We we had to live with a very wet summer Dave.
Andy
Youโve got a face turning up here matey, when only a couple of days ago you were telling me that spring is fine and to enjoy itโฆ. I could go on but Iโm doing my best to keep myself under controlโฆ.๐
Keep calm and breathe. ๐
๐Weren't one of them Gurus in the seventies wer yer?
I'm wiith you Dave same hemisphere. Love the alliteration and am glad to see more of your poems.
Well then Soren, I'll do my best to keep going.....
Thanks for the call.
Nicely done, Dave. Love that last line. It's grey wet and miserable here. But in Manchester that's also the summer. ๐
Aaah! I love Manchester. As a weekly tourist and one or two other visits, for you I hope for better times.
PS: Please revere and not ignore your Town Hall..๐
Thanks, Dave, yeah, I do like Manchester. There's still a buzz about the city. And agree about the town hall. There is some great architecture. Cheers, Tom
Great write
Stamp of approval appreciated.
You're welcome
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Two thumbs up
a great haiku! ๐ช
Looks like spring
ain't sprung,
the way you
expected it too!ยฟยฟ
Best regards peace โ๏ธ Thad
Thanks Thad....'See you around....๐
Spring is my 2nd favorite season, after Autumn, and yours sounds fitly sodden, as needed for growth. Delightfully rendered in your characteristic style with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Growth? Growth? Missy , you are late; summer has arrived. Still wet and ** hot/humid** The bloody lawn will grow up to yer knees overnight... Bless you anyway...nice to know someone worries about my situation....
You're NOT a "hothouse" bit of fauna and flora? I'm not either. Ugh!
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