Autumn it Is Not

Doggerel Dave


Notice of absence from Doggerel Dave
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. ๐Ÿ˜‚

 Autumn it Is Not.

  ****** 

Antipodean

Weather wet windy woeful;

Spring sprung, little sun.

  • Author: Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2024 01:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Haiku โ€“ my version.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 52
  • Users favorite of this poem: ๐“†ฉMase๐“†ช, Cheeky Missy
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  • orchidee

    Is your Autum like our Spring in the UK - with one of us (or both) being 'upside down'?!
    Sir Orchi NS says: Australia? That's just round the corner; 5 minutes on the No.7 bus from the UK. lol.

    • Doggerel Dave

      Sir Orchi NS is round the corner (bend?) alright.
      However, I must reluctantly concede that you obviously gave my little piece at least some consideration.

      • orchidee

        Sir Orchi NS - I dunno who he is - some nutty chap! lol.

        • Doggerel Dave

          You are beyond belief... do I have to periodically remind you of the Non Sequitur element of your award?

        • Neville


          this is not a classic, is it sir ..
          I am increasingly of the mind there is summat in this global warming .. innit

          • Doggerel Dave

            's possible I 'spose....

          • Goldfinch60

            We we had to live with a very wet summer Dave.

            Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              Youโ€™ve got a face turning up here matey, when only a couple of days ago you were telling me that spring is fine and to enjoy itโ€ฆ. I could go on but Iโ€™m doing my best to keep myself under controlโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜‡

              • Goldfinch60

                Keep calm and breathe. ๐Ÿ˜€

                • Doggerel Dave

                  ๐Ÿ˜†Weren't one of them Gurus in the seventies wer yer?

                • sorenbarrett

                  I'm wiith you Dave same hemisphere. Love the alliteration and am glad to see more of your poems.

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Well then Soren, I'll do my best to keep going.....
                    Thanks for the call.

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Nicely done, Dave. Love that last line. It's grey wet and miserable here. But in Manchester that's also the summer. ๐Ÿ™‚

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      Aaah! I love Manchester. As a weekly tourist and one or two other visits, for you I hope for better times.

                      PS: Please revere and not ignore your Town Hall..๐Ÿ‘

                      • Tom Dylan

                        Thanks, Dave, yeah, I do like Manchester. There's still a buzz about the city. And agree about the town hall. There is some great architecture. Cheers, Tom

                      • Tony36

                        Great write

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          Stamp of approval appreciated.

                          • Tony36

                            You're welcome

                          • Thad Wilk

                            ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
                            Two thumbs up
                            a great haiku! ๐Ÿช
                            Looks like spring
                            ain't sprung,
                            the way you
                            expected it too!ยฟยฟ
                            Best regards peace โœŒ๏ธ Thad

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Thanks Thad....'See you around....๐Ÿ‘

                            • Cheeky Missy

                              Spring is my 2nd favorite season, after Autumn, and yours sounds fitly sodden, as needed for growth. Delightfully rendered in your characteristic style with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

                              • Doggerel Dave

                                Growth? Growth? Missy , you are late; summer has arrived. Still wet and ** hot/humid** The bloody lawn will grow up to yer knees overnight... Bless you anyway...nice to know someone worries about my situation....

                                • Cheeky Missy

                                  You're NOT a "hothouse" bit of fauna and flora? I'm not either. Ugh!



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