The Reason Why Colours Make Out
When colours merge with
no discernible edges
and bleed into each other,
the way they appear
here through the windows
of my man-cave ..
Take note and be sure to
make time to
drink each one of them in ..
For something
brand new and so close to
perfection, is soon
to be birthed here again ..
And whilst unable
to stop or to quell all these
joyful tears from
forming upon the reverse
of my dry lenses ..
A freshly watercoloured
vista in well
warmed pastels, damp as
my very own
two cheeks and as cool
as morning dew then emerges ..
Yes another day
is crafted and like so many
flawless predecessors ..
It remains only as
a brief, unframed, unsung
and unsigned
masterpiece, traced lightly
across my personal horizon ..
And together, we named
that briefest of moments, Dawn ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Good write N.
Not bad then .. cheers Steven 👍
Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began softly and emerged itself as the dawn with glowing soft colors. Very nice
Thank you most kindly my friend .. Every now and then they just seem to fall into place .. words do, that is .. everything else remains such a jumble .. Neville
Oh, dear Neville, you wake the painter in me with that one.
You are a man of many talents Jez .. I am quite sure that painter was only dozing .. and I am truly flattered .. Neville
Oh, if all mornings could birth so brilliantly. A masterful write N. 😁👍
Now wouldn't that be something .. massive THANKS are on their way kind Poet .. Neville
Great write
I don't think I shall ever get tired of hearing you say that Tony36 .. not even when you are Tony136 🙂
You're welcome
Superb words Neville and so very true.
Andy
Thanks Andy .. I couldn't ask for more .. Neville
a true masterpiece- your words just fell in the right places and created this beautiful vision. keep it coming..
You just made my morning .. Bless you my friend .. Neville
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