Compassionate Concern

orchidee



Tune: Serenity

('Immortal love, for ever full')

Mark 9 v.20-27 parts

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Jesus did meet a father's son

Who was a troubled one

Afflicted by spirit evil

Not settled life at all

 

The father asked Jesus if He

Could do anything, see

His plea, Have compassion on us

Help us, you see us thus

 

Jesus said, If you can believe

And do this truth receive

All things are possible to they

That believe in this day

 

In anguish the father with tears

Said, I believe, appears

My unbelief here, help it do

I full want to trust you

 

Jesus did then the man's son heal

Compassion did He feel

Restored him to a healthy state

Showed His love, power great

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 6th, 2024 02:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 8.6.8.6. There is more than one tune to the hymn in the video.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 25
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  • sorenbarrett

    Belief is a powerful thing and can accomplish things unimaginable.Nicely written Orchi

    • orchidee

      Thanks SB.

    • Cheeky Missy

      Lovely rendition of a familiar passage which says more than we realize at first glance, methinks. While the 8,6,8,6 form is, if I recall aright, called Common Metre, yet iambic metre [i'AMB] is most often utilized and either I'm not yet fully awake or the metre in these stanzas is too jumbled to be readily sung as given. But it is lovely to again see that metre used! Thank you for sharing!

      • orchidee

        Thanks CM. I think 'metre' has some other meaning, to be exact. Something about certain stress on certain syllables in each line. My poetic talents don't go that far. I would have too much 'stress' working out those stresses! Yes, 8686 is Common Metre.
        I don't know what iambic is - something to do with architecture? lol. As in Iambic columns.

      • Neville



        surely this is a hymn poem in 8686, or iambic confused ..

        • orchidee

          I am being (I am bic) thankful for your comment N. And isn't bic a type of ballpoint pen?! lol.

        • Goldfinch60

          Good one Orchi

          • orchidee

            Thanks Gold.

          • Thad Wilk

            Wonderful hymn poem,
            eye pleasing imagery! 🙏
            Poetic perfection
            penned superbly!! 💯
            Thanks for sharing my friend!
            Best regards ✌️ Thad

            • orchidee

              Thanks T.

            • MaxSmith

              Good evening Orchi, nice to see you still writing.

              Compassion to healing, beautiful message. Compassion goes a very long way.

              • orchidee

                Thanks M.



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