~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse)

Thad Wilk

i was seven when my

grandfather passed on,

as i stood by his casket

in the ballpark of life

and death, the bases

were loaded-

 

my dad was my coach,

as my eyes filled 

he came to the 

batters box,

squeezed my hand and

without moving

his lips,

i got the signal

'grown men don't cry'-

 

i hit a home run on that

day, but when my

dad died i was on my

own and this was the

world series; the rain

fell in torrents, i didn't 

win this game but i

became a better man~

 

  ~*~*~*~*~*~*

  • Author: Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 8th, 2024 08:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: form, free verse
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 41
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  • orchidee

    Good write T.

    • Thad Wilk

      Hii Orchidee!! 🐹🐹👋
      Thank you my friend!!
      Great a hearing from ya!! 👍
      Y'all have a great day!! 😊
      Best regards ✌️ Thad

    • MaxSmith

      A very touching read.

      But so you know, grown men definitely can cry.

      Thanks so much for sharing

      • Thad Wilk

        Hi poetess!! 👋 💐
        And thank you
        for your
        lovely comment
        you sent my way!! 🙂
        I appreciate it immensely
        y'all have a nice day!!
        Best wishes 🤗🌹. Thad

      • sorenbarrett

        Great analogy and a good message as well. Nicely done Thad

        • Thad Wilk

          Hii Soren!! 👋 🍵
          Thanks my friend
          always great hearin'
          from you, I appreciate
          your inspiring comments!! 👍
          Best regards ✌️ Thad

        • Goldfinch60

          Super words Thad, we all go through this and I am not at all concerned about showing my emotions at any time.

          Andy

          • Thad Wilk

            Good day Andy!! ☀️😊 👋
            Thank you my friend!!
            Great hearin' from ya!!
            Hope you have a great day!! 👍
            Best regards ✌️ Thad



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