Candle's burning beneath our moonlit sky
We slow dance to sweet music of nature
Whilst our wanting limbs entwine
I unbutton my blouse slowly with graceful tease
Watch my fingers trace between my breasts
Invite you to indulge in what you please
Your fingers placed between my pursed lips
I taste them whole as our eyes lock in
Then travelling down into my underwear they slip
I take you greedily as your wanting fingers thrust deep
I pour you my lustful river
Intoxicated, I awaken from my beautiful wet dream
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Author:
M.s.Lockett (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hmmm, I think the gist is obvious lol a little fun write.
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Comments8
Seductive, errotic, sensuous you're going to arrouse the crowd. Nicely written.
A dream which tastes like a subtle liquor ...
I knew this had to be a winner among the boys as, despite being tempted too many hours ago to attempt similarly, I figured someone more experienced might know best how to render the delectable invitation to such heights of pleasure. Superbly rendered with intoxicating poignancy and deliciously graphic imagery. You take the cake! Thank you for sharing.
Sometimes these are tricky, many can become uncomfortable reading and its usually hit or a huge miss.
I am very grateful you took the time to read and enjoy the journey.
You should give it ago, speaking from personal desires help the flow.
I will be eager to read if you do lovely, they are always a fun read
Ah. Ya. I believe my temptation stemmed mainly and only from rereading an old piece of mine whose title is still very applicable to myself. I think I'll leave it at that, for now anyway. I'm too inexperienced with more than brothers or teenage boyfriends.
This is so good, the first time I came by here I was blown clean away ..
Exquisitely well poemed erotica is top of my list of poetic genres and this one is exceptionally tasteful .. bravo Max .. Neville 💛
Beautiful and erotic. I love it.
Thanks so much Thomas
Such a wonderful sensuous dream Max
Andy
Thanks so much Andy
Sensational,
the imagery divine!! 🏆
Just resonates
with greatness!
Love it ; 😍
poetic perfection,
each and every line! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
an erotic journey, well written
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