Dream

MaxSmith



Candle's burning beneath our moonlit sky
We slow dance to sweet music of nature
Whilst our wanting limbs entwine


I unbutton my blouse slowly with graceful tease
Watch my fingers trace between my breasts
Invite you to indulge in what you please


Your fingers placed between my pursed lips
I taste them whole as our eyes lock in
Then travelling down into my kickers they slip


I take you greedily as your wanting fingers thrust deep
I pour you my lustful river
Intoxicated, I awaken from my beautiful wet dream








  • Author: MaxSmith (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 10th, 2024 11:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hmmm, I think the gist is obvious lol a little fun write.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 39
  • Users favorite of this poem: Thomas W Case
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  • sorenbarrett

    Seductive, errotic, sensuous you're going to arrouse the crowd. Nicely written.

    • MaxSmith

      If one could have such arousing dreams, only fair to share the pleasure.

      Thanks so much for the read as always

    • Lorenz

      A dream which tastes like a subtle liquor ...

      • MaxSmith

        Glad you liked the taste Lorenz

        Thank you for the visit

      • Cheeky Missy

        I knew this had to be a winner among the boys as, despite being tempted too many hours ago to attempt similarly, I figured someone more experienced might know best how to render the delectable invitation to such heights of pleasure. Superbly rendered with intoxicating poignancy and deliciously graphic imagery. You take the cake! Thank you for sharing.

        • MaxSmith

          Sometimes these are tricky, many can become uncomfortable reading and its usually hit or a huge miss.

          I am very grateful you took the time to read and enjoy the journey.

          You should give it ago, speaking from personal desires help the flow.

          I will be eager to read if you do lovely, they are always a fun read

          • Cheeky Missy

            Ah. Ya. I believe my temptation stemmed mainly and only from rereading an old piece of mine whose title is still very applicable to myself. I think I'll leave it at that, for now anyway. I'm too inexperienced with more than brothers or teenage boyfriends.

          • Neville


            This is so good, the first time I came by here I was blown clean away ..
            Exquisitely well poemed erotica is top of my list of poetic genres and this one is exceptionally tasteful .. bravo Max .. Neville 💛

            • MaxSmith

              Then I should look forward to perhaps reading some of your erotica? I enjoy reading possibly even more than I enjoy writing it.

              Thank you so much for your visit Nev, your responses are always most welcomed

            • Thomas W Case

              Beautiful and erotic. I love it.

              • MaxSmith

                Thanks so much Thomas

              • Goldfinch60

                Such a wonderful sensuous dream Max

                Andy

                • MaxSmith

                  Thanks so much Andy

                • Thad Wilk

                  Sensational,
                  the imagery divine!! 🏆
                  Just resonates
                  with greatness!
                  Love it ; 😍
                  poetic perfection,
                  each and every line! 😊
                  Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad



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