Driving in the rain

Tony36

Tap

Tap

Tap

Rain on the windshield 

As I drive endless miles yet to go

 

Tap

Tap

Tap

The ever falling rain

Is almost eno6to drive me insane 

 

Tap

Tap

Tap

A light drizzle turned to down pour

River banks are rising

The roads are getting  flooded

And still

 

Tap

Tap

Tap

For what seems like eternity 

The rain on windshield 

The droning noise as I drive

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 13th, 2024 06:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write Tony.

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • Cheeky Missy

      You're apparently my opposite in at least one degree--where I dearly cherish rain, you're annoyed by its droning. Delightfully rendered with a tantalizing simplicity yet haunting subtle poignancy, this is lovely. Thank you for sharing.

      • Tony36

        You're welcome and thank you

        • Cheeky Missy

          Oh, but of course, my pleasure.

        • sorenbarrett

          Just like the rain hypnotizing I can hear the windshield wipers.

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • hzugman

            Love your format. Tap Tap Tap.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Thomas W Case

              Fantastic.

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • rebellion_in_sanity

                Hi Tony, it's so somple, yet it succeeded in drawing a clear visual for me. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Bhaskar

                P.S: perhaps this is what I call accessible poetry, simple renderation which evokes detailed visual and through that the transference of the core message

                • Tony36

                  Thank you

                • Goldfinch60

                  Driving in the rain can be both annoying and wonderful Tony.

                  Andy

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you Andy

                  • Kerry

                    I do like the tap, tap, tap! Can picture myself seated and driving. Thanks for sharing.

                    • Tony36

                      Thank you

                    • Qurrat Al Ain

                      Rain and a drive. Can imagine how pleasant that would be!

                      • Tony36

                        Thank you

                      • DeadRose

                        oh its been raining for days here. not that I mind. it is quite soothing

                        ☕🌹

                        • Tony36

                          Thank you

                        • NinjaGirl

                          Beautiful

                          • Tony36

                            Thank you



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