Tap
Tap
Tap
Rain on the windshield
As I drive endless miles yet to go
Tap
Tap
Tap
The ever falling rain
Is almost eno6to drive me insane
Tap
Tap
Tap
A light drizzle turned to down pour
River banks are rising
The roads are getting flooded
And still
Tap
Tap
Tap
For what seems like eternity
The rain on windshield
The droning noise as I drive
Comments10
Good write Tony.
Thank you
You're apparently my opposite in at least one degree--where I dearly cherish rain, you're annoyed by its droning. Delightfully rendered with a tantalizing simplicity yet haunting subtle poignancy, this is lovely. Thank you for sharing.
You're welcome and thank you
Oh, but of course, my pleasure.
Just like the rain hypnotizing I can hear the windshield wipers.
Thank you
Love your format. Tap Tap Tap.
Thank you
Fantastic.
Thank you
Hi Tony, it's so somple, yet it succeeded in drawing a clear visual for me. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Bhaskar
P.S: perhaps this is what I call accessible poetry, simple renderation which evokes detailed visual and through that the transference of the core message
Thank you
Driving in the rain can be both annoying and wonderful Tony.
Andy
Thank you Andy
I do like the tap, tap, tap! Can picture myself seated and driving. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you
Rain and a drive. Can imagine how pleasant that would be!
Thank you
Beautiful
Thank you
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