tide watch

jim56

i like to watch the tide rolling home once
rolling very gently covering the shore
covering the sand rolling wild and free
with its gentle waves bringing in the sea

seagulls at the waters edge looking for a treat
crabs or maybe shrimps things they love to eat
then the tide it turns to roam again once more
heading out to sea to another shore 

all a part of nature that makes the world go round
all a part of life where wonders can be found

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 15th, 2024 05:11
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  • sorenbarrett

    Lovely Jim peaceful and rhymic in the eternal cycle nicely done

    • jim56

      thankyou for lovely comment
      means a lot

    • peet

      So peaceful and calming indeed. Amazing lines.

      • jim56

        thankyou for lovely comment
        means a lot

      • Caring dove

        Nice to be by the sea.. I don’t see it very much .

        • jim56

          i live 20 minutes from beach not far to go
          thanks for comment means a lot

          • jim56

            where i live theres lots of sand and wild life
            it so peaceful xxx

            • Caring dove

              Well , lucky you ….

            • Tony36

              Excellent

              • jim56

                thankyou for comment means a lot

              • Goldfinch60

                Yes I can totally understand that Jim and we will be in that place next week on the Isle of Wight where our hotel room overlooks the seashore.

                Amndhy

                • jim56

                  hi thanks for comment have nice time on the isle wight

                • Dan Williams

                  Yes, sitting on the dock of the bay! Nice work.

                  • jim56

                    thanks for comment



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