Deep Secrets
Somewhere hid
and deep ..
Between all those
creases
and the folds
each one unique
to her ..
There lies
a double fluted
pleat ..
A signature
sublime and rare ..
More perfect
than an
orchid smiling ..
Yet even
as their sweat
did mix ..
She placed
a finger light
against
her pretty lips
and commenced
to whisper
hush, don’t dare
to tell a single soul
you have ever been here ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments6
How come you know my 'dark horse' adventures? - orchid(ee)! lol.
it's the way you ride them and make em squeal
Errotic and sensual with great lines "More perfect than an orchid smiling" Such tactful yet vivid imagery gave way to the softest and tenderest loving ending so well put that it brought a smile to my face.
What more could an old fella ask for .. Many thanks and then some my friend .. Neville
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the pancakes 🥞 were edible! Good things tend to come in pairs!
I quite agree .. I have a thing about slippers and twins too .. thanks a billion mate .. Neville
Excellent write Nevilie
Thank you Tony .. Neville
As stated, it's the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art. You were lucky she was with you, enabled your riff ....sometimes...nah forget it - it was a long time ago...
Yet evidently still remembered .. must have been very special .. thanks for swinging by Dave .. Neville
Some secrets can be hidden forever Neville.
Andy
for ever is a relative concept in my book .. but I get the point you make .. perhaps .. Neville
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