Have you ever touched the rain,
looked an eagle in the eye,
alleviated another's pain,
stopped a baby's cry?
Taken the time to watch the mist roll in,
walked in a cloud,
felt the touch of love's skin,
noticed the texture of a dead man's shroud?
Do you know the scent of pink?
Can you talk to the birds,
taste the flavor of ink
feel the power of words?
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: October 18th, 2024 04:43
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Comments9
Yes I've done it all. Beautiful my friend ๐น
Thanks I figured that you had and I appreciate your read. Waiting for your next poem.
its what poetry was made for isn't it .. real quality stuff & again, then some .. ๐
Thanks so much Neville for the read and most kind words of encouragement they are appreciated as always
All I have done in the dreams I have dreamt. But, not all in life.
Thanks so much Maplespal for the read and comment. Yes dreams do allow for more unless you are really adventurous
Not quite all, no - but enough to know there's a richness out there if I seek it. Well writ, Soren.
Thanks so much Dave yes I'm sure you have and I hope you find it all.Appreciate the read and comment
Seems I have had some experience in varying degrees of depth and breadth with all the above save for a satisfactory conclusion to the scent of the colour pink!
thanks Cryptic well pink smells like a baby girl, tender flesh, a dawning sky, strawberry wine and pink champagne with just a few other spices. Thanks so much for the read and comment
Dead manโs shroud not yet but this piece was well penned
Thank youi domilla Iappreciate the read and comment it is deeply valued. As for the dead man's shroud hope not but we will all touch our own one day, hopefully not for a long time.
KP's done it all of course, and with millions of people watching her as usual, enhancing her motto: 'Me, me, me, always and ever'! lol.
If she is me you can be I just practice saying it. Thanks Orchi appreciate the read
Great words soren I have done most of them but do not know the smell of pink. One I have done that may seem strange is walking in a cloud, many years ago my wife and I were walking up a hill in the Yorkshire Dales and walked through a cloud to get to the top of the hill.
Andy
Thanks Andy I appreciate your read and kind words they mean a lot
I now realise that I have been doing nothing but study and this reminds me to go out and enjoy sometimes. This is one of the best poems I have seen and my friend loved it too. Thank you for such a great poem
Your kind words overwhelm me and I feel humbled by them. It is I that thank you for the read and such a supportive response
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