Was I alone on this motorway,
The fog filled the air,
No other cars to be seen,
I could just make out the road
At this slow speed.
Then, out of the gloom,
A light!
Ah! I wasn’t alone,
A light to welcome me,
Into a world where others dwell
I drew closer to this welcoming sight.
Which said;
“FOG”
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It was a foggy day.
- Category: Humor
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Comments9
I reckon FOG stands for 'Fool On the Go" What possessed you to get out on the road in such conditions? What would we do, Andy if something happened to you and we could not start the day with one of your poems??
Don't worry Dave I am not going yet but thank you for your thoughtful words.
Andy
Yes, you are right, Andy, The THOUGHT was there😇LPL - Leg Pull Loudly
Ahh, that was to let you know it was foggy - for folk who've never seen fog before, and don't know what it is! lol.
So true Orchi, many do not know what we knew in the past.
Andy
That's kind of like putting the curve in the road sign after the curve isn't it. A fun read Gold.
Thank you soren, yes sometimes the obvious is announced like my sat nav in the car it warns me that there is a traffic jam ahead when I am in it.
Andy
lol 🌹
Thank you Teddy.
Andy
I haven’t driven in fog recently, the type where someone has to walk in front of the car with a light in hand. (Shivers)
So glad about that arqios it is not good.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome Andy
Very powerful poem.Took me back to my morning commute.
Thank you David, those commutes could be fun. LOL
Andy
Wow! 😳
Glad you made it
out of that fog. Oh my! 😯
Guess you're one
dang lucky guy!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Yes I made it Thad.
Thank you.
Andy
enjoyed the surprise ending - keep it up...
Thank you Nafisa, most kind.
Andy
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