TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
A dire quest now requires a friend to rescue a friend
To get deep enough into situations to risk awkward
to be brave enough with no vacillation, to go onward
To recognize delicacy, be armed with intricacy, reversing inaccuracy born of those who have come from before , yet still dive straight into the maelstrom, with no detour, advice to heed warnings shrugged off , over run Painting shock on foes faces that think they have won
Realizing this mission , this battle , well it just begun. Extending no quarter no pity offered under this bloody sun. Clueless enemies are vanquished by an army of one , Poised quickly to rescue , to deliver those devils their due
You proceed with pure valor without question or pause, Windmills be damned, you’d March straight through holy hell for this heavenly cause
BOBBY O
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Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I would battle until I fall, then get up and try again. There is no limit to my love or my loyalty for this man.
- Category: Friendship
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Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
For sure
True friendship is a guardian knot that angel hands have tied .. I forget most of the rest .. but I get your drift and it seemed to fit .. so there and now I'm gonna hide
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two things and hopefully both. It strikes an emotional chord or it opens a new life changing perspective. This one certainly has done the first the second yet to be seen. This speaks to the loyalty of a friendship that is more than most want to give. Today's cardboard friendships are made of flimsier stuff. Well writen and composed (to risk awkward, to go onward) love how these were left in atypical grammer it emphasized the point. The next portion speaks to many qualities that a friend possess' and the rarity of such. A beautiful poem Bobby I don't fav many but this one is
Wow
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Loved the poem. Lines like "reversing inaccuracy born of those who have come from before" and "you’d March straight through holy hell for this heavenly cause" are stunning. Thanks for sharing
Did you listen yet to Gil Scot Heron?
Yes, I did and thanks to you I found this GREAT artist! I am now a fan. Still trying to wrap my head around Revolution Will Not Be Televised!!!!
Wait to you dig into “B” movie. We went from shogun to Reagan 26% of the registered voters they call that mandate
Tremendous warm painting of this scene.
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