On wings of steam an evaporated dream in a rusty kettle will not settle
Cooling vapor, in drops taper corroding a heart of metal
Truth in, a chameleon skin fades in pillow down
With egg shell gloves rescue delusion's love, smell under a clown crown
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: October 22nd, 2024 04:36
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Comments12
when impossible to grasp, it may not even be worth trying ..
Indeed this write is as cryptic as steam and I left it such you have grasped it. Dreams are just as difficult to grasp and understand only feel their effect
I loved it! Although completely unrelated, the poem reminded me of the song "The Impossible Dream." The correlation process inside our minds seems to work in a funny way.
Thank you so muc Rebellion for the read and comment it is appreciated
a chameleon skin fades in pillow down....
wherever these words come from Soren. my only wish is they keep on comming.
And so it is that dreams disguise but can't hide the camaflage of reality. Thanks for the read and comment my firnd
Love it
Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi
Gee Wiz this one hurt 🤕 🤣 oh so brilliant
Thanks Teddy appreciate the read and kind words. Sorry for the pain it was inadvertant
No pain no gain 💜
Wow! 😮
Powerful penning
Pain filled imagery,!!
A superb read
expressed superbly!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
Thanks Thad your words are more than gracious.They are deeply appreciated
Tremendous painting of this scene.
Thanks so much Thomas your read is most valued
Short and captures the images of surrealism .
I think . Reads like a song .
Loved it. 👍👍👏👏
Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this piece it is most appreciated
Intriguing words soren.
Andy
Appreciate your read Gold sorry for being so cryptic but those things happen
A cracking write, Soren. Really enjoyed this.
Thanks so much Tom I very much appreciate your read
powerful words conveying an intriguing message..
keep it coming
Thanks so much Nafisa your comments are deeply valued.
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