Maze that has no end
Trapped
Wondering aimlessly to escape
With no hope in sight
The Maze stretches mile after mile
Each turn leads to another turn
Another twist
Another hope dashed
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Author:
Tony36 (
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Wow! I felt the poem was talking to me - a strange sensation. No extra words, no complexity, yet so artistic - an excellent poem!
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You are welcome
Life is such with the exit what we are not often looking for. Nice write Tony
Thank you
Good write T.
Thank you
Labyrinth is also a fascinating topic !
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The very stuff my nightmares are made of .. Neville
Thank you Nevilie
Short and succinct
captivating indeed!!💯
A-MAZEing imagery and
expressed skillfully! 👍
My pleasure to read!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
That's life it is a Maze and it is Amazing. Clever poem.
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But each turn could lead us to the wonder of new life Tony,
Andy
Thank you Andy, and you are right about that
Some life parallels here! Thanks Tony
Thank you and you're welcome
Nicely done, Tony. Really enjoyed.
Thank you
keep walking and enjoying the sights while you do, the end will appear unexpectedly and hope it leads to a glorious outlet
Thank you
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