Ice-Slide

Teddy.15

 

three giggling penguins

 

frozen water, rock of ice

  

belly flops ahoy.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 24th, 2024 04:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Senryu 🌹
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 34
  • Users favorite of this poem: MendedFences27
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  • sorenbarrett

    Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin it and the rest all fits in. Great Haiku Teddy

    • Teddy.15

      How about those who've never seen a penguin at all 🤣 simple fun today I'm glad I made sorrenbarret giggle 🤭 ❤️

      • sorenbarrett

        I have indeed enjoyed watching penguins on the beach here certain times of year along with seals and right whales. Splendid creatures

      • Tony36

        Awesome write Teddy, gave me a good laugh

        • Teddy.15

          Cool, 🤣 thank you dear Tony. Penguin 🐧🐧🐧

          • Tony36

            You're welcome

          • MendedFences27

            I think penguins are some of the funniest creatures alive. Your poem is a picture of some of their antics. And they waddle. - Phil A.

            • Teddy.15

              Honoured dear Phil, you have been tickled by their antics, thank you so much, lovely to see you. 🌹

            • Thomas W Case

              Lovely work, sweet Teddy.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you so much sweet Thomas. 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Back in my days at school we made ice slides in the playground Teddy, probably not allowed nowadays.

                Andy

                • Teddy.15

                  I'm sure it would be ok, but it's just a different climate. Thank you dear Andy. 🌹

                • Michael Edwards

                  Brilliant - love it xx

                  • Teddy.15

                    Lol you came on my Ice-Slide thank you dearest Michael, do you want some titles for new stuff? Just say yes I'll send some via pm anytime. 🌹

                    • Michael Edwards

                      ooh yes please do - always looking for inspiration - consigned to the home at the moment as little Stanley has just been discumnknackerated and is feeling very sorry for himself and very sore - has to be kept calm and taken out in the garden at intervals for the potty - can't leave him alone as he is at the moment - if you need any baubles for Christmas just let me know.

                      • Teddy.15

                        So we can talk about the knackers? That's the first title lol

                        • Michael Edwards

                          Seems a good start - busy today with vets et al but will look into it tomorrow.

                        • teardrop

                          Cute picture....goes perfect with your words....thanks for the read!

                          • Teddy.15

                            You are very welcome, thank you so.much for passing by to this my funny scribbles in semryu. 🌹



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