Life can be so strange at times,
We walk the path towards our future
When something happens,
Happens to bring sorrow,
Sorrow and sadness in life.
But on looking back
Many of those things changed our path
And took us to the best things,
The best things that happen,
That happen in our life.
-
Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 30th, 2024 02:08
- Comment from author about the poem: It can be surprising when bad things in our life enhance our future.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 66
- Users favorite of this poem: Qurrathul Ain, Accidental Poet
Offline)
Comments12
We all walk that path but some don't see beyond the next step.
So very true Michael, thank you.
Andy
Beautifully said dear Andy, mine brought me to a Bella vita in Italy. 🌹 💜
Thank you Teddy, what a wonderful time you are having.
Andy
You are not only write Andy, but you are a credit to the terms optimism & positivity .. 😎👍
Most kind Neville, it is the way I am after being given a second chance at life.
Andy
At the beginning of a new (MPS) day, I look forward to an attempt to cancel my sometimes too evident pessimism.
Go Andy.
Cancel it away Dave, life is good as we are still here.
Andy
Good write gold. We may not always seem to see, or to think there's a way through, when we're in the middle of the bad times.
Very true Orchi but there is always a way out.
Andy
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best we just don't know it at the time. Whether true or not if your truely believe it you have nothing to fear and nothing to regret it guarentees joy and happieness and what else is worth having in this life. A lovely write that I am in agreement with
Thank you soren, your remarks enhance the way I feel as well.
Andy
This is very true. Good Bad or Ugly it all contributes to a rich life. Great poem
Thank you David and very true.
Andy
What was meant to be bad turned out for benefit- a beautiful outcome. Hope that doesn’t mean the end had justified the means 👍🏻
The end will always be wonderful arqios.
Andy
Agreed Andy 😊
Beautiful Andy! The pattern repetition in these lines really drive the point home, that tough circumstances in life can really flip around to bring positive change. “When something happens, / Happens to bring sorrow, / Sorrow and sadness in life” and “And took us to the best things, / The best things that happen / That happen in our life.” Masterfully written! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
So very kind Tristan and much appreciated. It is a method I use in many of my poems.
Andy
You are welcome! It is very effective!
Everyday is filled with events in our life, good or bad. Usually, they balance each other out. But all we can do is learn from it and move on. Great write Andy. 😉👍
Very true AP, we always need to move on.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony, most kind.
Andy
You're welcome
A fine write. My dad always says everything happens for a reason, and he's usually right. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Tom.
Thank you Tom, much appreciated.
Andy
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.