The sun in rivers does run, to its sea on the ground
wetting all around, reflected echoes resound, yet not a sound is found
Currents of light pour morning to night, islands of shade drowned
An incoming tide won't be denied under rule of Helios crowned
From below shadows grow, dark hands reach to the sky
Out of a star challis sip, firm in Isis grip, drink moon dreams supply
Drunk in sleep, images creep evaporated light sun's sea dry
a tomb turned womb, sleep deep with the queen on high
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: November 3rd, 2024 03:56
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Just leave it up to Helios to turn the whole thing around ..
Thanks Neville they say the sun never shines on the dark side of the moon but I doubt it. Its all a matter of perspective. Appreciate the read
An interesting read soren. I like it. ππ
Thanks Accidental your comments are most appreciated
One of the finest ever nature poems I've ever read, your use of metaphor is amazing. Imagery well, spectacular dear sorrenbarret πΉ
You are so kind my friend, thank you for your most encouraging words of praise they are valued and cherished.
Should they spin enough around each other then they may meet at all points at some rotation, perhaps. Donβt know enough of that science to calculate.
There are multiple attractions in this universe. I also am too naive in astrophysics to say much more. Thanks for the read my friend it is most appreciated
An outstanding poem,
eye pleasing imagery!ππ
The rhyme, the metaphor,
woven wonderfully!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace. Thad
Thanks so much Thad your support means a great deal
Some lines seem to come from the centuries of Nostradamus !
I'm old but I don't think I ever met him. Thanks for the read it is appreciated.
Good write SB.
Thanks for the read Orchi appreciate it.
Wonderful words soren, the sun and the moon bring such wonders to us.
Andy
Thank you Andy I appreciate your read and most kind words
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