Amaterasu

Neville

Amaterasu

 

A view, through evening mist

is perhaps

the kindest time of day to look

at her and see

what might otherwise be more

than her beauty ..

Just add a touch of candlelight

to catch a glimpse

of transient perfection, indeed,

the rim around

her halo shines brightest when

I close my eyes

tightly to take, all her radiance in ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 21st, 2024 02:27
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Oh! Rendered with a strong and lively poignancy which transports the dainty imagery beautifully adorning it to heights that leave me nearly gasping for a breath from the heady indulgence, ah, where hast thou taken me dear writer? Thank you very much for sharing.

    • Neville



      I dunno but I shall come n join you as soon as I work out ya co-ordinates .. Cheers Missy

    • orchidee

      Well, you can't mean KP, unless you mean radiance of old trouts! lol

      • Neville



        there's always something fishy going on with you, isn't there

      • sorenbarrett

        The Shinto sun goddess one of the three precious children. The moon and the storm may make a mist as well. Beautifully written, Neville.

        • Neville



          Many thank you's sb .. such visits are invariably appreciated .. & muchly .. Neville

        • arqios

          Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a profound ability to perceive and internalize moments of transcendent beauty and significance beyond the physical realm. It allows us to capture the ethereal essence of experiences, transforming them into deeply personal, spiritual reflections that resonate within our soul. This inward gaze, like that of the observer of Amaterasu, embraces an interplay of light and shadow, presence and absence, revealing the eternal and divine within fleeting moments of our lives. Or perhaps she was just so dazzling so as to effect such a meditation.

          • Neville



            I think you just about said all that could possibly be said on the matter .. I take it that's a yes .. and if my hunch is off mark then I'm gonna thank you regardless .. thank you arqios .. Neville



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