Death is the justice of an unfair world
Marriage is a joint acquiescence to imprisonment on bread and water impearled
Freedom, distorted vision of heat waves over sand
Friendship’s gesture, middle finger of a waving hand
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KP's my ball and chain in my marriage! lol
The ball and chain will keep you well anchored. Thanks.Orchi
wow, every now and zen, something reminds me of that legendary Bruce Lee saying .. writing without writing .. and like death, tis inevitable ..
Thanks so much, Neville. Your words are always appreciated and valued.
There is so much to think about in this gem. Death Marriage Freedom and Friendship. The Fantastic Four. A wonderful piece. Well done
Thank you, David. You are too kind. I appreciate your gracious comments.
Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully expressed, evocative and provocative. So much to unpack in such a tiny package 📦
Cryptic I look forward to your visits and then thankful for your kind comments. May you have a wonderful day
Excellent write
Very through-provoking. Love the juxtaposition used in this piece. Very effective! 👏🌹
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
Such a different way to look at life soren, intriguing words.
Andy
Thank you, Andy for your tolerant response to what many might state is a negative view. The last I tried to take different views on different things and your response is most appreciated.
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