THE CARELESS CARPENTER

Michael Edwards

 

THE CARELESS CARPENTER



She said ‘Mend the door’ – I duly obeyed

and commenced the task quite undismayed

but when chiselling away like a frenzied demonic

I cut my thumb and the pain was chronic

I shouted out ‘Christ’ – and that was ironic

for Christ it is said was good at his trade.



  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 23rd, 2024 05:48
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    I suspect it’s a good thing that He was good at His trade, a reliability we all count on in our fallible days.

    • Michael Edwards

      Sure is
      thanks for looking in.

      • arqios

        β€˜Twas good that I did! πŸ‘πŸ»

      • sorenbarrett

        Fun read season with just the right amount of humor

      • orchidee

        Good write and pic M.

      • Neville



        ........................................... Is this wot we call an Ouchie by any chance .. πŸ˜ŽπŸ§πŸ‘

        • Michael Edwards

          Dangly ephemera. thanks Neville.

        • Jerry Reynolds

          A fine poem and painting, Michael.

        • Tony36

          Excellent

          • Michael Edwards

            thanks for looking in Tony.

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • Teddy.15

              LOL ouch 🌹

            • Thomas W Case

              Excellent.

            • Doggerel Dave

              I nearly missed this one the way you nearly missed the chisel, Michael. Glad I didn't.

            • Goldfinch60

              He may well have been a good carpenter Michael.

              Andy

            • NafisaSB

              your poem beautifully depicts how infallible the Lord was; and it also shows how fallible we are..



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