Here's a silent poem - or a waste of a poem again...
Verse 1
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Verse 2 - up to last verse - 5,496.
Same layout as verse 1.
I dunno what format it is
Can't see it - it's invisible!
Could it be an 8.8.8.8?
Or a 6.6.8.6.?
Or even a 10.10.10.10.?
It might be a 9.5.7.8.
Whatever you want it to be
And how long or short you want it to be!
I want no grumbles of
'Oh, I can't write poetry'
See - Silent Poems - the simplest sort
Am I pulling your leg?!
And if I pull the other leg
Has it got bells on? lol.
Do shut up now, Orchi, says Fido
You're beginning to ramble again
Keep taking your tablets! heehee.
- Author: orchidee ( Offline)
- Published: November 27th, 2024 10:05
- Comment from author about the poem: More daftness! lol.
- Category: Humor
- Views: 32
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
Comments12
Next time we can use a metronome to help us keep time with this silent poem! The Hymn could be ‘Silent Night.’
Thanks A. lol.
Anytime o!
I think I’m losing my mind. This is the second poem. I’ve read today that speaks of silence, emptiness, and that I can’t see. Fun nonetheless till five out to be quiet.
This is a poem of utter rubbish - or nonsense! lol.
Keep the daftness coming! That Fido really has a tough job reigning you in, huh? 🤣 I never thought of writing a "silent" poem...well done friend! 🌹👏
Thanks T. How do we know how many verses it has?! lol. Fido says I long as I don't take a certain blue tablet. Then it would be in the realm of TMI - Too Much Information to tell! heehee.
LOL! Hahahahaha! Indeed! 🤣
Hmm, did your rats write it?
Thanks M. They are guinea pigs! lol.
Lol riight
That's another unknown fact I didn't know.
Thanks M. Fact No.11?
My muse has been very quiet lately Orchi. Been posting older stuff. I think your silent poem could be catching.
As to the tablets. Keep taking them 😂
Thanks Cassie. lol.
Absence makes the heart grow fonder......And it would be fonder still if you could up the volume of the silence even further........
One was singing off-key (not me) at a place of work. Someone remarked: \'Is there music, or a tune, to that?\' lol. Aww - you fond of Sir NS\'s sidetracks?
Lol. Excellent.
Thanks T.
Here is a piece of music that fits with your poem Orchi.
https://youtu.be/rDgHUj8sJaQ?si=tNdfhQmrKLP2K9y4
That old 4' 33" thingy?! lol. Why didn't he make it, Oh, I dunno, random 2' 45", 5'38", or 23'59" even?! lol.
Maybe just increase the dose morning noon and night .. leave those ones in-between at the same dose for now ... Okay 🐧👍
Yes lol. Thanks N. I'm sure this poem is in 8.8.8.8. - Eh?!
Silence is golden
Thanks Golden 2.
he he he- the silent appraisal from this end- lol
Thanks N. lol.
welcome dear
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