Watched
He watched her from
his balcony
towel drying her hair
and later
while having breakfast
opposite ..
He had hoped to catch
her applying
sun oil before the sun
rose too
high and it got too hot
to handle
his 8x42’s or hold them
still enough
to see clearly through
the heat haze
and her wicked shimmer ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: December 5th, 2024 05:50
- Comment from author about the poem: On a particularly cold day, these words came back to me .. Oh' and for any horneythologists out there, I am by the way, currently saving up for a better pair .. 🤍
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Comments10
Voyeuristic longing amplified! And bettering one’s equipment indicates that even the most dedicated observers need the right tools to truly appreciate the finer details.
You got me .. I need something bigger but that doesn't impede or stop me from getting away quickly .. cheers Neville
Never have the right tool when we need it, Enjoyed the read
You need one of them Swiss army pocket knife things that has everything including a gadget that gets boy scouts & girl guides out of horses hooves . thanks for seeing through me my friend .. Neville
You are very welcome
Ah, the voyeurs lament! When the tools 🔭 we have don't suffice! Enjoyed this one, Neville...as I do your poetry! Well done, friend!
That'll do nicely Tristan .. thank you kindly sir .. I need something bigger but that doesn't hamper my getaway .. Neville
If any try to voyeur KP they get a nasty shock, and may never recover from it! lol.
can't say I blame them really
Hot write, Neville.
....................................... sorry Jez 😎👍
I love this. Powerful work.
Thanks Thomas
The beauty of a woman is a powerful attraction. So powerful, that we are tempted to watch even in-appropriately. Your poem tells of this attraction in a devilish but delightful way. - Phil A.
try as I might, I can't think of anything more aesthetically pleasing .. thanks for the thumbs up brother Phil .. 😎👍
Excellent write Nevilie
Cheers T .. N
You're welcome Neville
Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford. Twitching is big in Australia where sightings of rare species can cause massive attention...
its the same everywhere .. and of course when it comes to twitching .. size sure does matter .. 😎👍
Those distant images are worth while enhancing Neville.
Andy
Thanks Andy .. Neville
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