Grey Day Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



What a grey day is was all of the day,

A fine mist in the air all of the time,

Not really rain but the wetness did stay,

And this miserable day was now prime.

 

Not a glimpse of the brightness did abound,

Just grey and misty for all of the hours,

No matter what the greyness was around,

And misery seemed to always be ours.

 

Even though the weather was not so good,

My life was still filled with love and wonder,

As beside me my lover always stood,

With love that would never go asunder.

 

So even on those miserable days

Our love for each other will find its ways.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2024 02:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: It was a miserable grey day with a fine misty rain all day yesterday.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • Neville



    with respect, I love how you seem able to turn absolutely anything and everything into a positive or a plus .. 😎👍

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Neville, it's a pity I can't do it for politicians. LOL

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Yes, same here, though it turned to proper rain by late afternoon, but not too chilly.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

      • sorenbarrett

        The company we have overcomes all outside forces. Very nice Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Very true soren, thank you.

          Andy

        • TobaniNataiella

          A lovely way to say i still love you, really enjoyed the read, Thank you

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind Tobani, thank you.

            Andy

            • TobaniNataiella

              You are very welcome

            • Teddy.15

              Come rain or shine! 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                So true Teddy, thank you.

                Andy

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Beautlful. A gray day never overshadows love. Amen! 🌹👏

              • Tony36

                Excellent write Andy

                • Goldfinch60

                  Much appreciated Tony.

                  Andy

                  • Tony36

                    You're welcome Andy

                  • arqios

                    Impregnable!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you arqios.

                      Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      A beautiful sonnet, Andy. Full of love and romance, it speaks to the heart.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you soren, much appreciated.

                        Andy

                      • Thad Wilk

                        What a great Sonnet!! 👍
                        a miserable gray day can
                        be depressing, 😢
                        but love can make it
                        become a blessing! 🥰
                        Thanks for sharing my friend!!
                        Best regards ✌️ Thad

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Much appreciated Thad, thank you.

                          Andy

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          Through all the mist and misery appeared......... not just optimism, but overwhelming good cheer....☺️

                          • Goldfinch60

                            So very true Dave, thank you.

                            Andy

                          • Cassie58

                            You find the blessings of life Andy even on the grey days. That is a gift itself. Enjoyed your posted music.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              I certainly can find those blessings Cassie, thank you for your kind words.

                              Andy



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