brown eyed girl
warm chocolate melting
soft curl a fountain
tickles on her left ear
a tumble of summer cornfield
half smile from a white cotton pillow
sheet turned down
three days in
how long a piece of string
blue curtains tremble
roller coaster heartbeat
another day passes
pawns in waiting
breathe a sigh of relief
family ghosts whisper
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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Good write Cassie.
Thank you Orchi. Hope you are looking after KP.
half smile from a white cotton pillow
It was especially impressive. It's a wonderful poem.
Thank you rin. Much appreciated.
Masterful Cassie! Each line a new reveal that paints the picture of a girl or woman in such colorful detail. I felt like I was watching an artist paint. Deserves a Fav
Thank you very much Soren, especially for the fav. That means a lot.
I found this very touching, i have probably got it all wrong and i am sorry Cassie if i have, but i get a sense in the poem that someone is going through there last days. Still a beautiful read, Thank you
You aren’t on the wrong tracks, suffice to say, there have been similar situations in the past. Many thanks for your valued comments Tobani. Always appreciated.
I am glad i didn`t get wrong, have a good Sunday
Thank you and you too Tobani.
So very stunning even more powerful read more than once. You my friend have mountains of talent. Life's circle. ❤️
Thank you dear Teddy for that lovely compliment. Means a great deal. ❤️🌹
This is masterclass, Cassie. I could feel the fragility in each word and the last line...family ghosts whisper. Boy, do they! So true! Brava, my dear dear friend! 🌹👏
Dear Tristan, thank you so much for your very encouraging review. Means a lot. All best wishes.
You’re welcome, Cassie!
Excellent
Thank you Tony for reading and your encouragement. Much appreciated.
You're welcome
So many beautiful images here. It lets the imagination run wild and free.Enjoyable writing
Many thanks David for your kind comments. Very much valued. All the best.
There is such a fragility in our memories and all-encompassing are the complexity of relationships, the passage of time, and the intertwining of personal and familial histories; woven together in a much enjoyed poem.
Thank you arqios for sharing your thoughts and interpretation of my poem. Pleased you enjoyed my efforts. I appreciate your visit.
👏👏 Bravo!!
A stunning poem
like a painting I'd say!! 🎨🖌️
Eye pleasing imagery,
just blew me away!! 💯
Loved it poetess!😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
Thank you Thad for your very encouraging review. Much appreciated. All good wishes to you.
Fine words Cassie.
Andy
Thank you Andy for stopping by. I appreciate your visit and your thoughts.
Perhaps the past, the ghost will never cease to whisper. Who knows? Surprising twist in the tale. Fantastic
Thank you RIS for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
So pleased you enjoyed this poem.
Oh! How this ably culls swooning in the delicacy of its essence whose poignancy yet weighs so heavily the feather cannot but sink. What delicious imagery, the poem laden to effect with and very beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
Thank you Cheeky Missy for sharing your valued thoughts. So pleased you enjoyed this poem.
Very deep thoughts here Cassie. Seems as though she is reveling in past thoughts. Another great write.
Thank you dear teardrop. The thoughts like clouds streaming. I appreciate your visit.
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