Counting Blessings

Cassie58

as i walk in winter’s garden 

past a birch tree and green ivy 

down to where old seating’s lonely 

in a corner in the dark 

there i turn to face the red brick 

of my home and on the decking 

fairy lights glow so inviting 

lifts the spirits soothes the heart 

 

hanging from the beams are lanterns 

table covered potted planting 

seasonal in red/gold colours 

festive dressing our delight 

where our young ones like to mingle 

where their laughter echoes loudly 

cold air cheered while breath condenses

wrapped in layers stars shine bright 

 

count my blessings i am thankful

for the gifts of all i’m given 

in a world that’s rocked by conflict 

marred by death, destroyed the light 

where destruction and division 

blitzes souls and hopes for future 

all while logs inside our burner 

blaze and spread their warmth by night 

 

  • Author: Cassie58 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 21st, 2024 09:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: While we celebrate, spare a thought for the sick, the homeless, the lonely, the hungry and those in war zones. Wishing all a peaceful and happy Christmas .
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy, Qurrathul Ain, MendedFences27
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  • TobaniNataiella

    A beautiful way to some up the contrasts of Christmas, Merry festive season to you Cassie

    • Cassie58

      Thank you so much Tobani for your kind thoughts. Merry Christmas to you and yours πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

      • TobaniNataiella

        You are very welcome

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Amen to your poem and mote, dear Cassie! Amen! Well done! πŸ™β€οΈ Merry Christmas!πŸŽ„

        • Cassie58

          Thank you so much Tristan. Merry Christmas to you and yours πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

        • David Wakeling

          A wonderful poem including the joy and the sorrow of this confusing world. Well done

          • Cassie58

            Thank you David for your kind appreciation. Merry Christmas to you and yours. πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

            • David Wakeling

              Merry Christmas to you as well

            • Teddy.15

              Stunning and worth a thousand reads dearest Cassie 🌹

              • Cassie58

                Dear, dear Teddy. Always so encouraging and kind. You are a beautiful person. Merry Christmas to you and your dear ones . πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŒΉ

                • Teddy.15

                  You are always in my heart dearest Cassie, you too are a very beautiful lady. Merry Christmas, to you and all your wonderful family. 🌹 πŸŽ„

                • Cheeky Missy

                  Very, very indulgently charming, rendered exquisitely with breathtaking imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy, what a treat this is. Thank you so very much for sharing.

                  • Cassie58

                    Dear Missy, thank you for your kind appreciation. Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear. πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                  • sorenbarrett

                    A beautiful recognition of the disparity between the fortunate and unfortunate and our need to reach out not just at this time of year but throughout the year.

                    • Cassie58

                      Thank you Soren for your kindness and appreciation of my efforts. Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                    • Thad Wilk

                      A wonderful poem,
                      thoughts and Christmas
                      message penned!! 🌲 ⭐ πŸ™
                      Brilliantly composed poetess,
                      beginning to end!!! 😍
                      Best wishes πŸ€πŸ€—πŸŒΉπŸ¦.
                      MERRY CHRISTMAS!! β›„πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„

                      • Cassie58

                        Thank you Thad for your kindness and appreciation of my work. Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear.
                        πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                      • Goldfinch60

                        We are so lucky in our lives Cassie unlike many who are suffering in this world.

                        Andy

                        • Cassie58

                          You are so right Andy. Many thanks and Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear . πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                        • orchidee

                          Yes, and we know it's not only at Christmas. My poem is: 'As I walk in winters garden in the rain and wind....' Doh!

                          • Cassie58

                            Dear Orchi, Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear, especially KP. Thank you for supporting my efforts and keep out of the garden when it is wet and windy πŸ™‚πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Powerful and poignant work, Cassie. Amen.

                            • Cassie58

                              Thank you Thomas for your kindness in supporting my poetry. Merry Christmas to you and all those you hold dear πŸŽ„πŸŽ„πŸŽ„

                            • MendedFences27

                              Wonderful poem Cassie. We all need to reflect on our blessings and realize how fortunate we are compared to those lost in the wilderness of strife and starvation. - Phil A.

                              • Cassie58

                                Thank you so much Phil for stopping by. Much appreciated. Happy holidays. All the best.

                              • NafisaSB

                                what a warm, caring and beautiful poem - am impressed by the thoughts and feelings it conveys
                                a very merry and peaceful X'mas, and let's hope for an end o hostilities around the war zones - and peace on earth [though it seems i am hoping for too much]

                                • Cassie58

                                  Thank you for your warm wishes Safina. Pleased you enjoyed my poem. Yes, let!s hope that the new year will bring an opportunity for peace in the Middle East and Ukraine. We can but hope. My very best wishes to you.

                                  • NafisaSB

                                    RECIPROCATED WITH PLEASURE..HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND AND LET'S PRAY THAT HOSTILITIES AROUND THE WORLD, ESP. UKRAINE AND MIDDLE EAST CEASE

                                  • arqios

                                    Blessings to share! That’s where blessings end, sharing to no end. Beautiful!

                                    • Cassie58

                                      Thank you so much. Pleased you found some value. Your thoughts appreciated arqios.

                                      • arqios

                                        You’re welcome Cassie! πŸ‘πŸ»

                                      • jim56

                                        hi Cassie this poem is beautiful as imagery thoughtfulness and emotion
                                        you really are a true wordsmith you always find the right words for everything you right
                                        your talent is really incredible the way you express thing using the word you use
                                        should be very proud of yourself never stop writing jim



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