Notice of absence from arqios
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Pip stands at the world's edge,
dreams vast as the sea.
A journey wrapped in every pledge,
discovering who he’s yet to be.
The past guides, not binds,
a compass in his hand.
Each step unveils new paths,
an uncharted land.
In every twist, a story speaks,
a future bright with possibilities.
Pip's journey continues,
each moment a squeak of hope.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: a subtlely dissipating rhyme
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Squeak on arqios, squeak on.
Andy
And we’ll muddle through🙏🏻🕊️
Good write Pip, erm, Arqios. lol.
Thanks O🙏🏻🕊️
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for this piece. It fits the theme where as the rhyme diminishes so does the hope. Ingenious a fave for that creative ploy
Indeed, the diminishing actually works like the musical score in film 🎥; thanks for pointing that out🙏🏻🕊️
Hope isn’t always served on a bountiful platter it would seem
Enjoyed the read
Thank you kindly🙏🏻🕊️
Your welcome
Ooh. I like the dissipating rhyming scheme. As for the poem, well done...well done! I kinda want to hear more about this (autobiographical, I presume) Pip. A series? 🤣 No pressure. I really enjoyed this, my friend! 🖤🌹👏 Oh...and I love the image you created/chose.
We’ll see how we go… there are a few prospective possibilities in the shark tank. 🙏🏻🕊
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From the cheesy movie, or Dicken's original? Either way, why are my eyes suddenly beginning to open after perusing this disarming beauty? Pip, of all things. La dee. How eloquent, rendered beautifully with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy! Thank you, thank you for sharing. Oh the artists!
Both, I must admit… each presentation offers angles that the other can’t by limitation of individual art elements, among other things🙏🏻🕊
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