On a tree outside
A woodpecker climbs quickly.
Its Christmas treat found.
© 2024 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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- Comment from author about the poem: True story. Nature is a treat to behold. Merry Christmas.
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Teddy.15, Mutley Ravishes
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A lovely ditty and a stunning picture
Thank you Tobani! Much appreciated! 🙏❤️
You are very welcome
A beautiful picture painted in these brief lines
Thank you my friend! Much appreciated! Glad it delivered! 🙏❤️
Oh! How very, very beautifully rendered! It almost makes me swoon! Charming in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
Thank you so much Cheeky! Much appreciated, my friend! Glad you found charm in it and that it delivered. 🙏❤️
Clapping! 👏
A wonderful haiku,
yes nature is a
treat to behold it's true!? 🕊️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad! Much appreciated my friend! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Glad it resonated! 🙏❤️
A great form and a great example.
Thank you so much Michael! Glad it delivered my friend! Much appreciated! 🙏❤️
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. 🌹
Thank you so much my dear Teddy! I am glad that li'l poem and cute little birdie warmed your soul as he did mine (presuming he's a he...not sure what the difference between male and female woodpeckers are, to be honest! LOL!)...anyway, tree fowl gender aside, this little friend was so beautiful I had to write, even though I was planning on taking the day off from writing. Well, that didn't happen AT ALL. This was the start of quite a poetic day and I have Woody here to thank for that! LOL! And the AI picture I generated really did capture what the li'l guy looked like! Thank you, again, Teddy, for your time and feedback. Much appreciated my dear, dear friend! 🙏❤️
A fine write and pic T.
Thank you Orchi! Adobe Firefly sometimes gets it just right and...in this case...it did! As for the haiku, thank you so much my friend. Very much appreciated! I hope you and your family had a very Merry Christmas, over there, parallel-ish from me across the great salt lake! 🙏❤️
Do you say 'y'all in your part of the USA?! lol. I think Thad on here does, or at least he doesn't mind me saying 'y'all'.
In the Northeast, where I am from (Eastern PA to be specific in my case), it's not traditionally used; however, it has pretty much become a colloquialism everywhere...though still not too commonly used in the northern parts of the USA. But no one would look at you like you had three heads if you used it! I use it all the time, actually. LOL!
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
Oh he certainly was, Mutley! LOL! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, my friend. I hope you had a joyous and blessed Christmas celebration with your family. 🙏❤️
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