Love To Eternity.

Goldfinch60



When that person comes into your life,

That person you fall in love with

You know that the love is strong

As they take care of your heart

And keep it safe from harm.

That person will open up their soul

And keep no secrets from you,

They will always bring you happiness

And with that person you can laugh,

Laugh at and with each other.

I now have that love

With the person that I love,

Love so much,

And she loves me,

Loves me so much,

As we travel in our love to eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 28th, 2024 02:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: I am a very lucky man
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy, Cassie58
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  • Neville



    How extraordinarily lovely .. You are indeed a very lucky man .. Neville

    • Goldfinch60

      So very true Neville, I am a very lucky man.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • sorenbarrett

      A lovely tribute to a love held dear. May that love be with you always

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you soren, much appreciated, I am sure it will.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        You are indeed dearest Andy so is Mary a very lucky woman, joy and happiness to you both always 💐🤗

        • Goldfinch60

          So very kind of you Teddy, thank you so much.

          Andy

        • Tony36

          Excellent write Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Tony.

            Andy

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • Thad Wilk

              A beautiful
              romantic poem and
              dedication to the
              one you love!! 💗
              Thanks for sharing
              my pleasure to read indeed! 😊
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

              • Goldfinch60

                So very kind Thad, thank you very much.


                Andy

              • David Wakeling

                This is special. I particulary like the line about laughing together. It is so important. well done mi amigo

                • Goldfinch60

                  Laughing at and with each other is so important in life together David, thank you very much.

                  Andy

                • arqios

                  You are indeed a very lucky mine. My love, she tells me all the time that we shall grow old together, and I’m hanging in there and it’s been good!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    THank you arqios.so glad that your life together is so good as well.

                    Andy

                    • arqios

                      Thanks Andy 🙏🏻 We do what we can 👍🏻

                    • Cassie58

                      Andy, you are indeed a very fortunate man. This is a beautiful poem of gratitude. Long may your happiness last.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        I certainly am Cassie, thank you.

                        Andy



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