How foolish we are
To think that we own the world
We simply share it
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 29th, 2024 15:02
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A few words that says so much, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much for reading, and happy that you enjoyed.
You are very welcome
Such a powerful senryu perfectly orchestrated wow it's why I love senryu it's so challenging and you have this perfect. To say mountains in a molehill brilliant. 🌹
Dearest Teddy you are the kindest. I learned what a senryu is from you, and pay homage to my teacher. I've had a dry spell away from MPS, and for some while walking this morning the words just popped into my head. It's really nice to be back. You have always inspired me, and for that I am eternally grateful.
❤️ you inspire me too dear friend ❤️
three lines that tells us all we need to know.
perfect indeed Bella;
Thank you my friend, I truly appreciate your kind words.
Beautiful and true a great Haiku or should I say Senryu. Loved it Bella
Thank you sorren, I was gone from the site longer than I had anticipated so I'm starting small, blowing off the cobwebs. I always appreciate your comments and your words of encouragement. Take care my friend!
So true. Excellent work.
Thank you so much, I've been away for a while and have missed all my friends.
Very true Bella, it is a shame that we cannot fix it though.
Andy
I am not one for tattoos but if I had one it would have to be this .. and displayed prominently .. my word, I do like you ink ma'am ..
Good write B. KP of course is deluded - all her world is 'Me, me, me'. That's her motto! lol.
Good write, we all share the world, but in the end, everything was only borrowed.
I love your comment, we are the borrowers. Thank you so much! Thank you also for the fav.
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So much appreciated, and thank you for the fav. Best wishes to you for the New Year!
Yes best wishes and blessings to yours too!
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