crossing caversham bridge
on the coldest of afternoons
breath condensing
fingers tingling
light fading fast
in a blemish free sky
first friday of the new year
sees ripples on grey water
frost on a deserted promenade
a plenty of swans a swimming
a graceful gathering of so many
white feathered beauties
in mid winter surroundings
impossible to count
bodies gliding and intermingling
in regal silence it seemed to suggest
they had gathered from every meander
on river’s length congregating in strength
in a chosen place to celebrate
without a trace of conflict
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Oh! How deliciously lively yet calm, the vision unfolding like a carpet rolling out to take the soul off in a twinkling frae this mundane realm to flights of fancy, using mere reality as its tool. Very lovely and excellently rendered with perfect imagery and delicate poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
Thank you so much Missy for stopping by. Know you are appreciated.
I have never seen a real swan. Maybe it's beautiful. Swan pedal boats are often seen.
You have never seen a real swan? Oh my, you have missed out. I have watched them forever on the river. I have seen them nest and the birth of cygnets. They are magnificent creatures. Swan pedal boats? Now you made me smile. Thank you rin.
Swans are so stately and beautiful. I love them and, dear Cassie, I love this poem. A wonderful, serene, New Year setting. Stunningly beautiful and also makes for a broader reflection on the world NOT seen in this poem. Brilliantly done,. my friend! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan. Pleased to bring you a little of my every day. Your thoughts are very much appreciated. Have a wonderful Sunday.
Do you live in or near the area? You might be near me - and KP! lol. I've seen the swans there too.
Oh yes I do and a lovely place it is too, to watch the swans. Thank you Orchi. Have a super Sunday. Wrap up warm.
Sets the image alight of the Kings and Queens of our waterways gathering to see their new year in, really enjoyed the read.
Thank you Tobani. They are indeed the royalty of the river. When we go boating in summer, they tap the side of our steel boat at dawn, with their beaks to tell us they are ready for their breakfast. They bring all their cygnets too. Have a super Sunday.
You are very welcome and You Too
Something so charming and peaceful just to be able to watch the swans, how truly stunning your imagery as it always is dear Cassie, something marvelous to see and with such positive vibes. Oh how I miss home just to be on the side of a beautiful.lake watching the swans. 🌹
Thank you dear Teddy. They are very calming to look at. Such magnificent creatures. They are the royalty of the river. I am fortunate to live close by. Have a wonderful Sunday. So cold here. 🌹
Royalty of the river is a beautiful way to say it. I agree totally, I've never seen one here in Italy as far as I remember 🌹
A most beautiful picture you paint here Cassie. Nature at its best and a feast for the eyes this a feast for the reader
Thank you Soren for your very encouraging review. Have a beautiful Sunday.
I love swans!!🦢🦢
You have painted
a most stunning scene,
so picturesque and serene! 😍
Thanks for sharing poetess!! 🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹🐦 Thad
Thank you so much Thad for your thoughtful review. I love swans too. 🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢🦢
I see the same on the Avon, the swans gathering in peace and calmness. Fine words Cassie.
Andy
Thank you Andy. They are magnificent creatures. So calming and serene. Have a great Sunday.
Sweetly Graceful, Nice One Cassie
Thank you Reynaldo for your encouraging review. Pleased you stopped by. 🦢🦢🦢
a picture perfect poem Cassie.
loved every word.
Thank you Melvin. So pleased you enjoyed my words. Delighted. Have a great Sunday. 🦢🦢🦢
Nicely done, Cassie. A lovely piece. I can just see those swans, you paint the picture. And love that you got in the swans a swimming line too. 🙂
Thank you so much Tom. Pleased you enjoyed the swans. Beautiful creatures. Have a lovely day.
You paint the scene perfectly. Beautiful work.
Many thanks Thomas. Pleased you enjoyed the read. All the best.
oh wow, you have painted such a beautiful image, i can almost visualize it in my mind's eye, and wish i were there to see itin person
beautifully composed
Thank you dear Safina for your thoughtful review. Pleased the imagery worked for you. All good wishes.
reciprocated in full - have a beautiful week
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