Barely Visible Indentations
They were always
such delicate
and pretty little
indentations,
that I could never
quite get
my head around,
nor fully
understand why
she ever
tried to hide them
in the first place ..
After all,
they served only
to mark
briefly the site
where her panties
had once been ..
And then,
leaving behind
them faint
ribbon like criss
crossed
undulations which
reminded me so
much
of old fashioned
opaque,
pink and blue
forget me not’s ..
Those which,
I once used to trace
with my
fingertips and my
tongue
and the edges
of my thumb nails
before
spooning into you
for the night ..
Each of us warmed,
feeling so safe
and perfectly sated ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Good write N. Meanwhile - you know I'm gonna say summat like this - If I see any of KP's indentations it only makes me swoon, in me sheltered life! lol.
Thanks for making a little dent in an otherwise as yet virgin page .. Neville
Being coy is a very attractive attribute as is being bashful and shy. Errotic and tasteful all in one. Glad your back
Cheers mate .. I'm glad to be back .. Neville
A bit racy to get the morning going, hope you had a good break, enjoyed the read
Cheers my friend .. the break could have been better but thanks for the read .. Neville
You are very welcome
Nothing like as hot and steamy as a fresh pile of pancakes for breakfast, la! How you dish up and serve like the master chef such verbal delicacies it'd be no wonder iffen we were taken out to the doctor next. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and a vibrant poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Welcome Back!
Bless you today and all days Missy .. if you can do blueberry & cream (I mean the real stuff thick, dubble or clotted) then I'll be write over with my fork n spoon .. Neville
Ooh! Clotted cream, the British specialty which when sold here also seem to carry the label Devonshire-- what fun and what a luxury that'd be, if only! My late mother who died 9 years ago this morning enjoyed clotted cream on biscuits with afternoon tea many years ago. We two girls enjoyed it so much she Googled how to make it yourself, and the recipe noted you could just slather it directly on your thighs since that's where it was headed. What a fun suggestion yours is! How I'd love to do so!!
Sometimes when the lighting is just so, they even look like henna tattoos fading. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Indeed, I am familiar with said light and the henna effect too .. Thanks for the nudge, I really needed that .. Neville
Nudge. Nudge… 👍🏻🕊️
Yay! Welcome back! I was just thinking about you and it looks that in doing so, I've manifested one of your poems! Woohoo!!! Hope your vacay went well! As for the poem, wonderful write, as always my friend. Sensual, intimate and a pure joy to read! Again, welcome back! ❤️🙏
Thanks & Big time my friend .. those words of yours have gone down a real treat this very cold Sunday early mane .. It is a lot colder here than the Med .. vacation could have been a whole lot beer as me & my gang all came down with the flu & big time .. Now absolutely exhausted .. still, good to be back .. Neville
Oh no!!! That sucks! So sorry to hear that Neville. That ol’ Murphy and his dang law wreaking havoc again! As for the weather, yeah…I can imagine the Med is the better place this time of year. I know it very much is from where I live in Eastern PA. Anywho, glad you are back and on the mend! Sounds like you owe yourselves another med trip sometime!
The subtle sensuality of this poem is quite provocative, and alluring. You've chosen your words well my friend, but then you always do.
and you my very dear Bella have again left a smile on this old fella's face .. thank you most kindly and oh' so true .. Neville 😎
Fine words Neville, such fond memories.
Andy
Thanking you kindly Andy .. Neville
sensual, erotic, what more can i say
No need, that'll do nicely, cheers .. Neville
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