And as I trudge my way through
the darkest of moments
I say moments
because life is full of these moments
isn't it?
moments that pass eventually
even when it seems the bad memories
remain for life?
they are in fact just phases
phases that teach us about ourselves
a tool if you like, that helps us grow
well, having survived bad love
I now seem to be able to write about it
and as I write about my once truly broken heart
and all the excruciating pain and grief I've endured
when it felt my life was being poured down the drain
from the gutter along with the dirty rain
the horrific feeling and realization
that I may never be the same me, I once was?
and in turn
the moment when everything changed for the better
because I had the courage to change it
I have come to the final of finales of reflection
as I now know the grand secret
that nobody ever tells us
when we feel we are suffering a broken heart
a heart my friends…
is but a muscle.
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What an intriguing title! But it all makes sense as well. 👍🕊️
Thank you dear arqios indeed when I thought I would die of a broken heart from love I did not. 🌹
You’re welcome Teddy 🕊🙏🏻
Indeed it is and it pumps that life giving fluid to the brain that interprets all giving us those feelings. A poem that speaks of those feeling present and past and lessons learned. A most heartfelt work
Thank you my dear sorrenbarret indeed even when it feels it will break from love. 🌹
Dearest Teddy, this poem is a wonderful conversation with the reader. It is an outpouring of feelings that culminates in a simple truth, and so beautifully said.
Thank you dearest Bella from the bottom of my heart for your words, that truly mean so much. 🌹
Genius. Great work, sweet Teddy.
thank you dearest Thomas. 🤣 🌹
This is raw, heartfelt, and beautifully reflective. Your journey from heartbreak to empowerment is deeply moving, and the ending—reminding us of the heart's resilience—is pure brilliance.
Thank you so much. 🌹
For something that is relatively small in size, the heart can certainly dish out some pain. Heart break can’t be eased either with a dose of paracetamol. I haven’t come across anyone yet who has died from a broken heart, though I know many who have suffered real heartache through loss and grief. A poem dear Teddy which is truly relatable. Beautifully penned 🌹
Thank you dearest Cassie, Relatively small in size indeed too cause so much havoc. Thank you for your compassion dear poet friend. 🌹
That love will be there for you Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy 🌹
truly beautiful poem. liked the positivity at the end, the most
Dear NafisaSB thank you so much, I'm so honoured you have enjoyed 🌹
keep them coming, please.. they are so good to read
See the analysis by Artificial Intelligence on my poem "The heart, that wonder" :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-194305
See the poem at this link :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17035244-Poem--The-heart--that-wonder---List-of-poems-on-AllPoetry--4-March-by-Soman-Ragavan
Soman Ragavan. 14 January 2025
Thank you so much dear Soman. 🌹
another true-to-life poem from the pen of Teddy;
every line breathes as life itself.
So incredibly kind of you to say so dear Melvin, as you well know a subject that is in fact close to my heart 💜
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