bicnic py the sea

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
an absence of Presence conjures Absence…


bailing soat happily out to sea
glailing foat eating up my tea
So wherever it is that I may be
a goating boat is a sight to see!

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 18th, 2025 07:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: …been living with this for years, do it with numbers as well, even if my clerical numeracy accuracy-efficiency is quite high. It all goes back to homework when I stammered a lot & couldn't get it right the tirst fime;nowadays it happens when I'm extremely excited, fatigued or emotionally upset, I tend to lol it off (spoonerisms and dyslexia)
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 46
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange, Teddy.15
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  • Cheeky Missy

    I likewise have dyslexia. Looks like a fun piece in pig Latin, or igpay atinlay, or similar. Humorously rendered with excellent imagery, thank you for sharing.

  • arqios

    Thanks cheeky missy, for some reason I have no access to your comment inbox; would you mind checking if I’m somehow blocked from access? Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      This has been happening to me too. Not on Missy's but Teddy's. I can't leave comments or send messages, but I can read, like and fave poems. 🤷‍♂️ Wonder if it is an MPS glitch or something.

      • Cheeky Missy

        Try again, if you're willing? Thank you so VERY much for letting me know!

        • arqios

          Ah! There it is, thank you 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️

        • sorenbarrett

          Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing

          • arqios

            Glad you liked 🤣 and I actually do that when I’m tired or giddy or flustered… it can be quite hilarious really z🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️

          • orchidee

            Good write A.

            • arqios

              Thanks O 👍🏻

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              I don't have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal with and, in this poem, you gave us a glimpse of what that is like. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 And, this was really a fun read too! Easily faved!

              • arqios

                Thanks Tristan; it’s quite a challenge and a put down in scholastic pursuits, the almost impossible task of keeping up with rest, the horrors of exams and presentations, etc. These days there’s auto correct and high in itself has its own set of glitches LOL! 😂

              • Teddy.15

                LOL ah goating around I see, ok you got me good arqios, I would be the first human to say it's absolutely no fun being perfect, it is in fact those imperfections that make us special. On Saturdays I teach a bunch of 12 year old Italians English, let me tell you there is a lot of laughter, mostly when I speak italian. 🤣

                • arqios

                  We have our students as well, there is no deficit of laughter on this end as well!

                • Teddy.15

                  bicnic py the sea

                  Could also be, piknik buy the see 🌹

                  • arqios

                    Yep, the possibilities are plenty. 🤩

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Stay away - I think it might be catching...😜

                    • arqios

                      Aha cooties!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Fun words arqios.

                      Andy

                      • arqios

                        Thanks Andy 🙏🏻



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