A slithering fog with cottony stealth envelopes the sleeping trees constricting the forest in its undulating misty grasp.
It swallows colors covering fragrances in a shed scale vapor of dewdrop trails.
Engorged and satiated it crawls up the mountainside to sleep until awakened by the hunger of another day.
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A wonderful poem that creates a vista so beautiful.Enjoyable
Thank you David your words of support are most appreciated and valued
Like it is telling everything to rest with it, wonderful image as you read, enjoyed the read.
Thank you Tobani for your review and most kind words they are always so welcome
You are very welcome
Wonderfully described sorenbarrett. You brought this mist to life with its movement and blotting out of the landscape. Done in such a creeping manner, it can take us by surprise.
Thank you so much Cassie for the read and most kind words they are always most appreciated
Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, now I'm thinking out loud this just has to be the landscape of Brazil right? I've been to Florida not such picturesque as Brazil π€£
Thank you dear friend for your read and words of support they are most kind. Yes that is true you guessed right
Canβt help but entertain a notion that this is more than just a poetic description of a mist. It is smooth, subtle and very atmospheric. ππ»ππ»π
Perceptive, everything that meets the eye is not what it appears. Thanks for the read and comment
Most welcome dear Soren! ππ»ππ»π
The mist not only comes to life in your rich imagery, Soren, the shape of the poem actually looks, at least to me, like a mist settling in. Really enjoyed this. Well done, my friend! πΉπ An easy fave for me.
Thanks so much Tristan I appreciate your reading of this piece and most kind comments
You're welcome Soren!
Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi
Great write
Thank you so much Tony it's appreciated
You're welcome
Hungry fog. It blinds the world of sense. Like a starving bear before his hibernation.
Thanks so much for the read and comment it is appreciated
very beautiful, creeping fog
Thank you so much Ninja for the read and kind words of support they are always appreciated
of course!
A really captivating
poem, great brevity! π
Awesome imagery
penned superbly!!π€©
Much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Thanks so much Thad your review and kind words are deeply valued
Good write Soren!
Thank you so much for the read and comment it is appreciated
Wonderfully put soren, fog just crawls all over.
Andy
Thanks Gold appreciate your review as always
Nicely done, Soren. A fine write.
Thank you so much Tom I appreciate the read and kind comment
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