Nude, sensuous or lewd?
The brighter the day the darker the shadows at play
Illumination subdued distortions viewed
Sun's radiance fades away, a skyline color of clay
In darkest night there is light
Black decay turns a horizon gray
A mote in the eye causes a person to cry so slight
A drop of ink in the sea, the drop of a single degree
In the dark of night the dimmest light is perceived as bright
Black or white wrong or right, our perception is all we see
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great poem about the contrariness of this crazy world. Opposites and paradoxes everywhere. Excellent
Thank you David for the review and your insightful comments
Light and darkness does affect our perception of reality, delightful interplay in poem form! 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
Thanks Cryptic your views are always valued and your visit appreciated
You’re most welcome Soren 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
Indeed exactly what we choose and want to see, wow powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you Teddy for the read and comment they are always appreciated
The end was brilliant.
Thank you so much for the read and comment it is appreciated
Awesome penning,
you're right 👍
black or white, wrong or right,
our perception is all we see! 😊
Great rhyme, flow and blend,
much enjoyed the read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad for the read and comment they are always appreciated
Perception is the right way to use our hearts and minds soren, we understand life in a much truer way using it.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy I do appreciate your reads and words of encouragement
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