At the Very End of Darkness
Where did the light come from
and who turned it on ..
I mean that golden glow the very
same colour as halo’s ..
Locked in a room with no windows
or doors but filled with orbs
with no present, no past or before
yet still glowing and darkly ..
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Neville (
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This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes that bounce off word's walls. It has a haunting quality reinforced by the last word. Nicely constructed its archetecture is musical
My word, how very kind you are my dear friend sorenbarrett .. Neville
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
It often makes sense to run with such gut feelings .. many thanks on their way my friend .. Neville
It’s easier I guess if one has never been gaslighted or second guessed. But this is a solid principle to understand and live by, like ‘muscle memory,’ instinct, intuition and such.
Excellent write Nevilie
Thanking you kindly and ever so Tony 😎👍
You're welcome
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
I am darn near replete my friend .. thank you so very bloomin much .. Neville
You are welcome, Neville! I truly enjoy your work...not to mention the poet! You do rock, I will say! 🤘😎
Did an 'Idea' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
If my memory serves me correctly, I think I was contemplating the issue of soul & I don't mean the place on Korea .. 😎👍
With my 3 brain cells I was contemplating sole - the fish, that is! lol.
Brillianrt work.
Cheers
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
Welcome back you old dog, you have been missed ..
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
I could see that coming a mile off .. cheers Sir Finch
Very deep and sincere, although quite reserved in terms of emotional side of the poem. best wishes,
I was feeling rather shy at the time of posting .. cheers .. Neville
the circle always turns a full round, there is always light after darkness - we just have to wait patiently, as it may be already there, but unseen
lovely write
thank you for stopping by my friend .. Neville
you are always welcome, and it's always a pleasure reading your poems
keep them coming - have a productive day
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