Seventies Love Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



The brightest light in my life is with me,

The lady that I love with all my heart

Is forever there and always will be

And we know we will never be apart.

 

If we are apart just for a short time

We just miss each other so very much

As our time with each other is sublime

We need to be close for that loving touch.

 

Our love for each other is so, so strong

That we need to always be side by side

Hoping that our life together is long

And we walk to eternity with pride.

 

It is so unbelievable for us both,

That in our seventies we fell in love.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2025 02:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: We just find it so hard to believe that we have fallen so strongly in love, we are both passed three quarters of a century old!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Oh! How winsomely rendered in this "most exquisite" form with tasteful imagery and a heady, waltzing, happy poignancy, celebrating the marvelous joy of your love and romance, despite the wild reality you're both well past 65!!! I love it! Thank you very, very much for sharing, Sir!

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kin Missy thank you, we are both passed 75.

      Andy

      • Cheeky Missy

        My pleasure, I'm so very happy for you two adorable love birds!

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold. is Mary centuries old too, as You and I are? Was she at 1066 too? lol.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Orchi. Yes she was the one pouring out my Laphroaig WITHOUT WATER!

          Andy

        • Neville



          Wonderful in so many ways and on so many levels .. Neville

          • Goldfinch60

            So kind Neville, thank you.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Love on into the sunset a happy ending to an old western movie. A beautiful thought and it might as well be real. Lovely Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              It certainly is real soren, thank you.

              Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Awe, such a warm and happy piece of knowledge two beautiful people indeed. 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Teddy, thank you.

                Andy

              • arqios

                So much there that brings light and joy and hope!

                • Goldfinch60

                  So very true arqios, we just don't believe how wonderful it is. Thank you.

                  Andy

                  • arqios

                    You’re welcome Andy! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️

                  • Tony36

                    Excellent write Andy

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Tony.

                      Andy

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome Andy

                      • Thad Wilk

                        A beautiful
                        love Sonnet my friend! 😍
                        Poetic perfection
                        superbly penned!! 👍
                        Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
                        Best regards ✌️ Thad

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Thad, much appreciated.

                          Andy

                        • David Wakeling

                          An amazing love story mi amigo. SO good to hear that love can last

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Most kind David, thank you.

                            Andy

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Tremendous work.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Thank you Thomas.

                              Andy



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