The brightest light in my life is with me,
The lady that I love with all my heart
Is forever there and always will be
And we know we will never be apart.
If we are apart just for a short time
We just miss each other so very much
As our time with each other is sublime
We need to be close for that loving touch.
Our love for each other is so, so strong
That we need to always be side by side
Hoping that our life together is long
And we walk to eternity with pride.
It is so unbelievable for us both,
That in our seventies we fell in love.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: We just find it so hard to believe that we have fallen so strongly in love, we are both passed three quarters of a century old!
- Category: Love
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Comments11
Oh! How winsomely rendered in this "most exquisite" form with tasteful imagery and a heady, waltzing, happy poignancy, celebrating the marvelous joy of your love and romance, despite the wild reality you're both well past 65!!! I love it! Thank you very, very much for sharing, Sir!
Most kin Missy thank you, we are both passed 75.
Andy
My pleasure, I'm so very happy for you two adorable love birds!
Good write Gold. is Mary centuries old too, as You and I are? Was she at 1066 too? lol.
Thank you Orchi. Yes she was the one pouring out my Laphroaig WITHOUT WATER!
Andy
Wonderful in so many ways and on so many levels .. Neville
So kind Neville, thank you.
Andy
Love on into the sunset a happy ending to an old western movie. A beautiful thought and it might as well be real. Lovely Andy
It certainly is real soren, thank you.
Andy
Awe, such a warm and happy piece of knowledge two beautiful people indeed. 🌹
Most kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
So much there that brings light and joy and hope!
So very true arqios, we just don't believe how wonderful it is. Thank you.
Andy
You’re welcome Andy! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome Andy
A beautiful
love Sonnet my friend! 😍
Poetic perfection
superbly penned!! 👍
Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, much appreciated.
Andy
Believe it Andy, it was meant to be. 🌹😉👍
It surely was AP, thank you.
Andy
An amazing love story mi amigo. SO good to hear that love can last
Most kind David, thank you.
Andy
Tremendous work.
Thank you Thomas.
Andy
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