Notice of absence from Teddy.15
I'm currently on a beautiful island with the ghost of Napoleon see you all soon, when I return from my annual holidays. So take care and I'll see you all soon. π
I'm currently on a beautiful island with the ghost of Napoleon see you all soon, when I return from my annual holidays. So take care and I'll see you all soon. π
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Teddy.15 (
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- Published: January 20th, 2025 03:24
- Comment from author about the poem: A champagne moment for me, I have been editing this poem for 15 years, today I have finally found the perfect ending. πΉ
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange, Cassie58, Thomas W Case
Comments4
You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and this ending is much better indeed (not that the other was bad but rather that this one is better) it gives a whole different feel to the poem. Brilliant!!
Dear sorrenbarret this poem being one of my most personal and comes from a place when I was young, now I'm older. Written 15 years ago ever knowing the ending didn't fit, after much pause and without stress, I have now finally found the ending that fits.
(I think) LoL thank you for all your kind words of support always dear friend. πΉ
Dear Teddy. An inspirational write with a superb ending. When you hit rock bottom, thereβs only one way up. Naked feet tell me of the pain it takes and the struggle in climbing out of the mire. Kudos πΉπ
Oh youn got it perfectly dearest Cassie, thank you so much biggest of hugs π€ π πΉ πΉ πΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
It is beautiful sweet Teddy. Pwerful work.
Thank you dear Thomas, one of my most important poems personally. Thank you dear friend. πΉ
Fine words Teddy and you have lifted into the light in your life's journey.
Andy
With all the hardship we encounter in life, it's the only thing to do. Thank you dearest Andy. I certainly did and I am forever here to share and to encourage others to do the same. πΉ Thank you dear friend. πΉ
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